The Last Single

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Shim Changmin and Park Yoochun.
Two people who were once bounded together in a love-relationship.
Facing the split and break-up all at once in front of their eyes...
How would they think about all the sudden happenings?
What would they write in the messages for their last single together?
How would they feel upon each other's messages?

Title : The Last Single

Author : randomcassie/5starssupporter
Characters : Yoochun, Changmin, Jaejoong, Yunho, Junsu.
Pairings : YooMin/MinChun/Kiss Couple. YunJae [slight].
Length : 3 long-chaptered (and 1 epilogue; probably).
Genre : BOYS LOVE. romance. splitband. non-AU. ANGST.
Rating : PG-15 because of some words.

DISCLAIMER : All the members belong to themselves and family. NOT the company. I own the plot.
WARNING :

  1. ANGST. I've warned you~ This fic is a completely ANGST. :)
  2. Each chapters would be long. I'm sorry if those were too long.
  3. Unclear plots... I think?

Author's Note

As you can see, I got this idea when I was reading the message for BigEast at Toki wo Tomete single. Somehow... Yes, somehow... I feel that Changmin's message looked like a reply for Yoochun's... And this idea has been lingered for a long time inside my mind. I've finally gonna make the idea into the real fic now. ^^ #randomnotes

On the second thought, I'm not sure by myself... But I do think that this is somewhat like a 3-4 long one-shots which are related one with another. lol.

This story is an entry for C A S S I O P E I A |Writing Contest|

Main poster was made by Najaeri and the Chapter ones are mine. :3
Beta-ed by MizCeeJay

Foreword

Is there a time that you wished time stopped out of all your memories?
P.S. For me, it's now.

PARK YOOCHUN

You can't actually stop the time~ Haha
So try your best to not regret~

SHIM CHANGMIN

"You're going to leave me out of your life."
"I will come back for you. You are always a part of my life."

"I promise you. Trust me like you always did."
"Since when are you keeping your words? Never even once."

"I guess your supposed-to-be love isn't that strong anymore."
"I love you so damn much. Believe in me."

"It's just you. I have no other real couple."

"I've lost my other wings now... I don't know how I'm supposed to fly."

 

"Goodbye, Yoochun-Hyung."

5starnables
[The Last Single] last chapter added. it's finally reached the end (though i'm not sure that it's really an end.) what do you think? comment is lovely. ^^

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TheChunfaceWillRise
#1
just read this again- couldn't help commenting again too~ its beautiful :'3
dbsk5Lover #2
Chapter 5: Wahhhhh! really love it. It was well write. Do more Yoomin please~
TheChunfaceWillRise
#3
omg this was beautiful ;-;
my poor feels, my poor poor Yoomin & DBSK feels ;A;
This was just perfect, I loved it <3
Thank you for writing this author :3
donnaughty #4
Chapter 3: "Why don't we see like this? That we have to keep the name alive; for our fans, ourselves, and... for them as well. We'll do our best to not waste our hard work since years ago until now. We'll make sure that he name can be remembered by everyone until forever."

Yes. Thank you, leader-ssi and Changmin for staying.
donnaughty #5
Chapter 2: aaaaaaaaaaargh!! my YooMin feeeeeeeeels!!! my ot5 feeeeeeeeeeels!!!

I'm reading this fic at work right now, and my eyes full with tears,,,eottokeeee?? TT^TT
Melodia-no-hanashi
#6
Chapter 5: Last chapter… *switch on the song and put it on repeat mode* *almost ready to cry already*
OH you introduce ChangKyu here? Oo I’m very surprised XD well at least that’s good that he has friends behind to support him.
Wow I didn’t expect the chapter to be long after either. This chapt is full of surprise! Lol
I like the fact that he thought about everything with the distance he got from the time that passed by. It’s still very hurtful, but it looks more mature in a way. Also I’m glad it happens in Japan, because for me they are Tohoshinki first ^^’’ just like Min, I think Japan was the hardest place for them to go, but it’s also the most beautiful part of their hard work.
Omo I can feel the mistake already <3 thanks Obaa-chan! And thanks to Kyu also? Ah yeah indeed. I knew it was evil plan, so since it’s not Changmin’s, it’s Kyuhyun’s XD
Uwa it must be so stressful! For both of them. Changmin because he wasn’t prepared at all and Yoochun, because he exactly knew what he would have to face, without knowing how Min would react.
Owww so Min… he tries his best to act strong. That’s so touching… Can I hug him again? I think it’s DongBangFreeHug today XDDDD
Oh Heechul the evil king with Jaejoong … true, should have thought about them too. Lol I like the few notes about YunJae hidden here and there ^^
This chapter is very different indeed, deep but also lighter.
Omo I soooo love Yoochun’s reply here.. moving on from his sadness but not from Min <3 Gosh So beautiful *melt*
They’re cute even if it’s still slightly bitter. Their feelings show the best# Nya~ So sweeeet, love Yoochun’s declaration! And I’m glad Min takes time to say out loud his feelings properly<3
Glad they decide to start over, without forgetting what happened but with the will to go on.

It isssssssss <333 that’s full of hope and very beautiful and nice and they’re lovely and and and… I LOVE IT! <333
It took me a long time, but I’m glad I managed to read it finally
Thank you for writing it darling~
Melodia-no-hanashi
#7
Chapter 4: Mouuuu… you wanna kill me from the start ? first the TV announcement (and I’ve been thinking about what is says a logn time) and then this expression “Former member” How harsh is that >< be nicer with your unnie!!
You’re alternatively make me pity Chun and Min, is that your goal? Killing me slowly?? U_U
Ah~ My babyChun <3 *hug* yes SM is bad and they control the media… but you’ll get use to it eventually.
Owwww <3 Junsu is very sweet and understanding. I guess I’d be hurt like Jae in this case. Jaejoong’s words remind me what they used to say about Yoochun, that he doesn’t share his pain even when the hurt is visible on him.
I hate Yoochun’s words >< it’s so true and so sad! Y___Y but yeah… in the end I have to agree with Jaejoong. And he must be hurt too in fact.. they all were ><
Ah~ what a desperate hug… lemme help, I’ll hug you too! (both :p)
Omo omo … second message … (thank you junsu!)
Yoochun got the meaning of his words in the end… that’s good he still remembers it.
I really like how you made those messages match. I know it was your idea from the start, but I still wondered how you’d make it and I really like. It’s like a secret code they share but also the representation of their feelings for each other, and their hope somehow, since they still can understand with few words.. I really like it <3
Melodia-no-hanashi
#8
Chapter 3: Poor Min looks really hurt, even when he tries to hide it. At least, that's good that Yunho is there for him and knows him well enough to know how to behave. It feels like he's torturing himself, but his doubts are logical. He even gives up his usual pride by begging his hyung and allowing such hug.. so touching. Poor baby, I wanna hug him too!
Yunho is a very good hyung and leader, very caring. hopefully Changmin has him or else it'd be worse.

Ow.. here comes the single. Oh My... nooooo you will change my feelings on this song >< I'm already gloomy enough sometimes, no need to make it worse Y.Y
How hard it must be for them...

Yeah that's true, there's something with this single and those messages. Like... hints. Easy to find different meaning with Yoochun's. Good that Changmin can see through it.
Heee!! how can Min say that!! Yunho is still (and forever) THE leader! ><
Omo and this phone call.. is he asking for forgiveness? That's sad that he feels like he had to...

Ah~ I feel like I've to listen to DB5K's song now
Melodia-no-hanashi
#9
Chapter 2: Goshhh I'm so very late with this ^^' Sorry ~

I'm amazed at how you give the tone with very few details. The heavy atmosphere, YC's doubts and yet resignation at the same time... ah~ not easy. That's beautiful but a bit hard to read somehow and on the other hand I don't want to stop. It looks real, really real. And that's difficult to accept it as it might have been like this. That's the feeling as I read at least.
I like the way you describe it. The way it follows YC's thoughts/feelings until CM arrives is very smooth. It's like an explanation about their relationship with few words directly talking about it. It makes it kind of complicated but also so easy to guess the context and history if you know a bit about DBSK. It's like hints for Cassies ~ I like that.

CM is quite harsh while YC looks a bit lost and taken by his own decision, but I can understand him so well. His pain and hurt, betrayal feeling... so Changmin. The bitterness he has makes his feeling looking so much stronger.. And that's so true, CM's eyes are really something! hurt and longing seem so powerful in them.
But YC's desperation is visible as well and I like the fact that you don't really take side on this and just try to explain both situations and feelings.
The conversation between them looks also real, it goes fluently, even how harsh Min is with Jae, it feels like it's only his hurt talking. YH's appearance makes the situation even more bitter, because it shows that they're not alone in this but all are involved and everything looks even more complicated this way.
It's impossible to take side but yet so easy to not feel both desperation. I don't know which one to pity more... you really made it difficult for the readers, don't you?
The goodbye is probably the worst part... sooo painful to read Y_Y don't cry sweeties
Ah~I hate the last part... well not really, but I hate to imagine it. So sweet and hurtful at the same time..

2000characters restriction?! WTF!
okay... NEXT!
LuvTia
#10
Chapter 5: so sweet
love it
thanks