Forbidden Love

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♚  Is this truly a love that can never be? 〕

   

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Two households, both alike in dignity,
In fair Verona, where we lay our scene,
From ancient grudge break to new mutiny,
Where civil blood makes civil hands unclean.
From forth the fatal loins of these two foes--

/drags the narrator away/ Yeah, yeah, bla bla bla. /throws the narrator into the garbage can/ Seems boring, isn't it? The typical Romeo and Juliet opening and the whole tragic ending stuff. What if we put a little twist here and there? Vampires and werewolves, typical. Don't judge me. But instead of Seoul, South Korea, we have here a giant floating continent of “ Neo Lunia” roaming in the skies of Asia, just above the Yellow Oceans of China. Unique creatures live there, and they are under the reign of the infamous Montague, the Great Werewolf. But what really keeps the land in peace and balance... is the Tree of Life hidden inside the castle...

You might think that Juliet is an all-delicate girly young lady, but no. She is a totally different person. Romeo? Not much of a playboy lover. Tybalt? Not as evil as you thought he was.

Join these young lads in their star-crossed adventures and discover the secret of Montague and the late Capulet...

The opening of the play will be altered by this author. The story's opening will be in the paragraph below...




Once upon a time,
in a place, a land where memory is long forgotten,
the floating continent, Neo Lunia.

This great power, floating in the sky,
doth sustain the breath of life and the prosperity of its people.
But at times, the foolishness of wordly passions
doth surpass all bounds.

The story now told is of a love,
ever-fresh and full of sorrow,
cruelly toyed with by fate in the midst of war.

 

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♚ ⋮ Trailer 〕

   

 

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♟  Le characters 〕

   

The Vampires

❝ Lindsay "Lin" Fiammatta de Capulet ❞

❝ 20 years old ❞

❝ The only survivor of the royal vampire bloodline ❞

❝ Kim An Ha ❞

❝ 23 years old ❞

❝ Lindsay's best friend ❞

❝ Kim "Suho" Junmyun ❞

❝ 23 years old ❞

❝ Leader of the Vampire Guards ❞

❝ Byun Baekhyun ❞

❝ 22 years old ❞

❝ Lin's personal tutor ❞

❝ Park Chanyeol ❞

❝ 22 years old ❞

❝ Happy Virus of the group ❞

❝ Do "D.O." Kyungsoo ❞

❝ 21 years old ❞

❝ Suho's second-in-hand ❞

❝ Kim "Kai" Jongin ❞

❝ 20 years old ❞

❝ Playboy of the group, Anha's little brother ❞

❝ Oh Sehun ❞

❝ 20 years old ❞

❝ Maknae of the Vampire Guards ❞

 

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The Werewolves

❝ YiFan "Kris" Candore de Montague ❞

❝ 24 years old ❞

❝ Heir to the royal werewolf bloodline ❞

❝ Kim "Xiumin" Minseok ❞

❝ 24 years old ❞

❝ Leader of the Werewolf Guards ❞

❝ Lu Han ❞

❝ 24 years old ❞

❝ Kris's best friend ❞

❝ Zhang "Lay" YiXing ❞

❝ 23 years old ❞

❝ Xiumin's second-in-hand ❞

❝ Kim "Chen" Jongdae ❞

❝ 21 years old ❞

❝ Troll of the group ❞

❝ Huang ZiTao ❞

❝ 20 years old ❞

❝ Maknae of the Werewolf Guards ❞

 

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Foreword

   

❝ Author's Notes ❞

Sorry about the description... I tried my best. So... this is exo_lover66 with a new story. Please love it and click that little heart icon below the title. This will be a very fun-yet-angsty version of Romeo and Juliet, but there's more than sticking to the original plotline.

This story is an entry to 'Away In Heav3n Writing Contest'. I used the 4th prompt:

"Forever with you (with you, with you, with you)
I'll be by your side until always..."
B.A.P - With You


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liviya #1
Chapter 10: Wow mysterious one
Fairyluve123 #2
Chapter 9: Hey update
fairylove262 #3
Chapter 9: Update update update update nnnnoooooooowwwwwwwwwwwww!!!!!!!
CallMeN
#4
Chapter 9: I love the story!!! Please update soon!
Princyysb #5
Chapter 9: Update soon! Hope that jiwon * coughs Lindsay coughs * will be able to meet kris in the next chapter :)
AmiMiya #6
Chapter 7: yehet~ as always, you ish awesome!! i luv you so much! update~ hawaiting~
vanhamdo
#7
Chapter 7: Nice~~~ I love it! ^^
izzaika
#8
Chapter 7: Not a cliffhanger~~~
SeoYeonEe #9
Chapter 6: It's getting really interesting~^^fighting

idon't think i can spot any flaws from this :)
izzaika
#10
Chapter 6: Update soon... New reader. Hehe. Love your story~~