Haunting

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             Hi! This is my new fic. This is based on an idea I got for an essay at school which got an A and a star. Lol, okay, sorry for bragging.

This is inspired by the Mortal Instruments.

This is also inspired by Mystaeria and Siona100I like both their workswink, go check out their stories if you have time, Mystaeria is very nice, although you need to bug her to make her update, haha, I'm still in the midst of reading Siona100's fic, so I'm not quite sure, BUT she is publishing a book I think, I wish her the best.  I was also inspired by my friend 'Chocolate' and my other friend who is'Japan-ized'(so i think imma make another part, if u can read this, I know u will have a grudge against me, haha) AND prettyflip_3's fic

Also a thanks to Apple-Piggy for helping me out lol if she didn't tell me to un-tick 'draft', I wouldn't have posted this and would have deleted this like my first fic. Forever clueless...

So, off to the foreword!

Foreword

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Kim Haeri

-Your typical mysterious 15-year-old that is always too curious for her own good and has more of a dark side

 

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Yang Yoseob

-A 16-year-old who is too sweet and caring, sometimes making his friend, Haeri roll her eyes at what he says

 

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-Jang Hyunseung

-A high-school senior with the age of 17 who is sometimes cute and sometimes y and is either way, irresistible

 

 

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Yong Junhyung

-An exchange student that goes to the same class as Haeri, who is quite the bad boy

 

 

 

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Son Dongwoon

-Unknown character

 

o Haeri has a complicated relationship, a

complicated life and a complicated past, but, she

isn't like the others. She's special, different,

but she doesn't think that she's the only one....

OK! So, here's the main list of the characters! I won't be revealing anymore unless you read the story, hehe.
Ps, the pics don't belong to me.

Words in this color are words that are added after updating, or this color before the words.

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Apple-Piggy
#1
Chapter 7: SO COOL SO COOL SO COOL SO COOL. VDSBJASDBJLDBSKJSD
D.O A CO-STAR = ME FANGIRLING AND LOL-ING EVEN MORE. But more characters means more job, so dun force your self. =3
Hmm, I actually felt bad a bit eh... =P My little Chae seems to be so unthoughtful ugh.
LALALLA, YOU'RE GETTING BETTER AT THIS. =] The words used are more deeper and beautiful.
I must say, it makes me feel a bit down reading this. =[ She sounds so sad that I feel like huggin her and feeding her an unlimited ammount of ice-cream supply so that she can get happier. And the guy she's talking about annoyed me a bit as to how CAN he not care about her. TAT Unless well, they're strangers and all that but yeah. =D
GOOD JOOOBBBB SUPPORTTTINGGGGGG YAAAAAA. GOOD LUCK ON THE NEXT CHAPTER
babblebubbleteaxoxo
#2
Omg dongwoon<3
and the vamp hyunseong omgege....><
Shereen u good man
Apple-Piggy
#3
Chapter 4: OMIGOSH. OMIGOSH. OHMIGOSH. I LURVE THIS CHAP. ESPECIALLY AT THE STARTING.
It was so awesome at the start. ;]
In the middle it was quite sad to see that her mom just left her like that. Meh, people are people. ;P
THHHEEEENNN... SHE went to emofagging mode. -.-
xDDD Well, don't blame her, I do that sometimes and I'm pretty sure everyone has those moments once a while.
LOL, I see what you did there somewhere in the nightmare part...
'This was way too terrifying even for a sadist like me'.
Seriously, I can see so much relation with you and your character. xDD
ANNNYYYWAYYYSSSS.... ;D
SO PROUD THAT YOU UPDATED. LET ME CLAP LIKE A SEAL FOR YOU. XDDDD
afiercesong #4
Aw. I liked this.
Apple-Piggy
#5
Chapter 3: LMAO, YOUR A/N IS JUST SO HILARIOUS AND LONG. xDDD
Hehehe, you got carried away, didn't you?
xDD Fluff is not something to be underestimated even though it looks so easy.
Apple-Piggy
#6
Chapter 3: FUUUUUUUUDDDGGEEEEEE!!!!!

YOU TROLLLLLLL! TTATT WHY YOU MAKE MY FEELS LIKE THIS?!

BTW, I'm glad I helped. xD I've seen that you used some parts of the song as inspirations. xDD BUT LADY. SERIOUSLY, NO MORE TROLLING. ;A; I WAS GRINNING LIKE THE CHESHIRE CAT AND GIGGLING SINCE IT WAS QUITE FLUFFY. BUT SERIOUSLY.... I-I-I UWWWAAAAHHHHHH THIS IS SO FRUSTRATING! The suspense in the end is amazing but VBKJDSKJSDKJLBVAJLKBDSKJBADVSKJL!!

TTATT I SHIP 'EM REAL HARD. ;A; OH GOSH, IF HYUNSEUNG APPEARS SOON, I BET I'LL PROBABLY HAVE A HARD TIME CHOOSING OVER THESE TWO.

GOSH, I LURVE THAT SONG. IT'S SWEET, NOT FLUFFY BUT REAL SWEET. xD U you by Apink is much fluffier. Plus, it was so bouncy and happy. I was Lol-ing at the starting of the AN since you wrote that they can comment purposely to get karmas. xDDD

ANOTHER UPDATE, ANOTHER GREAT JOB. I'M LIKE SO FREAKING PROUD OF YOU. QAQ I LURVE THIS CHAPTER.
Apple-Piggy
#7
Chapter 2: Wow, just WOW. YOU SAID YOU CAN'T WRITE SUSPENSE BUT I HIGHLY DOUBT THAT AFTER READING THIS WHOLE CHAPTER. You're amazing at writing, you know?! ;A; I love all of this so much.

MY FEELS, MY FEELS... I SHIP YOSEOB AND HAERI SO HARD. TAT

BTW, IS THAT SKELETON GUY... D.O? xD Cuz you mentioned somewhere that it was the guy with he big eyes. I LURVE THIS SO MUCH. YOUR GRAMMAR AND VOCABULARY ARE JUST SIMPLY TOO AMAZING TO DESCRIBE WITH WORDS. PLUS! YOU'RE A DILIGENT PERSON. ;A; You're awesome.

When you wrote the escape scenes, it was so intense that I had goosebumps and I'm not lying. Sure, it might be becuz of my crazy imagination but your words just makes everything even easier to imagine.

THIS IS PRECIOUS. QAQ GOOD LUCK IN THE NEXT CHAPTER. I'M SORRY AGAIN FOR NOT REPLYING TO YOU. MY MOM PUNISHED ME, I EXPLAINED IN THE PM. ;A; I seriously support you in this fic. GOOD LUCK. ;D
Apple-Piggy
#8
Chapter 1: JKVBSAKESHJABVSKJASB I LURRRVEEEEE THISSSSS
;A; UPDATE LADY, YOU HAVE TO UPDATTEEEE

xD Nah, just update when you feel comfortable. Gonna creep around here... Ngehehehe.

OTL I wished I had someone who would care for me like Yoseobbie did for her. ;A; Now I'm like kind of realizing that I'm so forever alone.

BTW, WHAT ARE YOU?! Omigosh, just loved the way u describe everything. Gosh, I wish my English and my Grammar was as good as yours. I'm too lazy to write this long but I feel like I really should follow your footsteps. Gonna call you 'sifu' now. xD JK, JK...