Great pacing! Im totally shocked with the part and those death, especially that of the baby's. But I felt goosebumps while reading this. I think you should put it in rated m, especially the scene, to forewarn your readers, authornim.
Overall, I loved those multiple reveals. Yoochun's death was also a surprise for me. I didnt expect that after his first scene talking. I loved Moon Chae Won! She's like the protagonist in almost all of my stories.
The fact that the ghost had able to impregnate her was another shock. Im excited to read the sequel now~
Chapter 1: I just noticed... Doesn't anyone find it odd that when there are haunted houses, you usually get them for a cheap price (e.g. Coraline, other horror stories)? Why don't people question that before they move in? O.o I know the father was pretty desperate to find a house in South Korea and felt that he didn't have much of a choice but you still have to be careful about where you go to live...
Anyway, I'm also wondering as to why his mother's friend went mad on the seventh day. (I'm not completely aware of supernatural beliefs so I asked.) I think the sixth day would be way worse than the seventh day, but I guess anyone would go mad if they were haunted by ‘things’ for an entire week. I'd go mad if I saw one for just an hour. *quivers*
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