That night the moon wasn't in the sky

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Jongkey Oneshot :DD

Key is thinking in the middle of the night. The moon wasn't there but maybe someone else can replace it.

Foreword

 

Well well well '-'
This is my first fanfiction here and i'm pretty sure i'll make a lot of grammar mistakes. 
I don't speak english (i mean, i study it at school) so this is a sort of a personal challenge. I translated a story that i wrote time ago, so this is it.
...I'm quite nervous right now xD
Hope you like it! >.<
 
Lily 
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susumiya08 #1
Chapter 1: your english isn't bad at all, the story was so short!!!! I want more!!!
saludlang #2
awesome!! :DD
GardenOfDestruction #3
Chapter 1: È carinissima!! Mi è piaciuta un sacco e non credevo sapessi scrivere così bene in inglese!! Non è affatto semplice!! Ho gousto notato qualche errore/distrazione o proprio scambi di termini tipo heat invece che warm, ma è roba superficiale!! Brava <3
WhoNeedAmerica #4
I love the title.<br />
Story is awesome!<br />
taemnation--fanfics #5
aw , your english is fine , mines' worst ! keke , awesome fic <3
snazzybop #6
That was really cute. Your English is just fine as far as I see n.n Don't worry about it.
Kimchi_mandu #7
awwww that's kinda sweet...and your english is perfectly fine by me! I just don't like the cigarettes...it's so much of a turn off for me XD
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