Halcyon City Review Shop [Closed until May 20th]

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Halcyon City Review Shop

Welcome to Halcyon Review Shop!

In this shop, we will provide you with useful critiques and helpful advice. We don’t use a rubric, because that seems intimidating. Instead we will write reviews in paragraph form. Our goal is to help you improve your story, along with your writing. 

Please keep in mind that we are trying to help improve your story. If we are harsh or say something you don’t like, we aren’t trying to be mean. If you want a useful critique, we won’t fluff it up. We will provide you with useful and constructive criticism. I believe that the only way to improve your writing skills is to receive a straight-forward review. If there is a story that we find is exceptional, we will feature it below.

Please note that we spend a lot of time on your reviews. We love feedback on letting us know how we did. Please don't be silent subscribers! Let us know if our critiquing was satisfactory. No bashing though.

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"The small fluttering of your wings seemed like it was telling me to follow you."
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"Creative minds are what shape the world. They are the minds that give people hope."
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request rules
1. Subscribe and please stay subscribed so you'll be notified when your review is ready.
2. Please don't bash reviewers, we have a life outside of aff.
3. Give us at least 2-3 weeks to complete your review. In any case, it may take a few days longer, so please bare with us. As of now, it's just me, so I may not be able to take as many reviews until I have a staff.
4. Comment after requesting or applying.
5. Please credit us in your foreword
6. Password: Don't Go
7. For those of you applying as a reviewer, the password is Dear Lulu
request status
requester : story title : reviewer : status
annealice_ : Miserably Happy : Amber : Working On
El-leeXO : Kidnapped : Hewooo : Pending 
ErinKrystal : Faith On Us : Brvkenroses : Pending
HaibaraShery : Hold It Against me : AwesomeIceCream : Working on
Tyffah : The Way You Glance : Aphrodite123 : Working On
requester : story title : reviewer : status
requester : story title : reviewer : status
requester : story title : reviewer : status
requester : story title : reviewer : status

Foreword

        http://24.media.tumblr.com/7f31f34866aecc1c36133ca2a3696775/tumblr_mkao0rbLf81rdpv10o1_500.gif

 



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 The Halycon
               City
                 "Anything could happen."

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Strings of light lace around the city,

feeding your dreams

                              "Lately I been, I been losing sleep,

Dreaming about the things that we could be

 

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Credit for poster: Crown Graphics Shoppe

Comments

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macchiato-
#1
Hey! I have just submitted the staff application form. Something went wrong with the first try, but it (should be) successful already. I apologize if you received more than one submissions from me!

Looking forward to hear more from you guys :)
HaibaraShery #2
Chapter 12: thank you for the review ;) and thanks a lot for the kind wishes.. I'll credit your shop right away
Angel110
#3
Hey, I requested a while ago and was wondering about the status of my request ^^
tyffah
#4
thanks alot for the review ^^
the comments and criticism helped me alot :D
HalcyonCity
#5
yes we're still hiring
CIndy934
#6
Hi, just want to know if my request has been accepted or not. It's not on the request list, so...
octy08 #7
Chapter 10: Hi :) Thank you so much for the review and I'm sorry for the late comment T.T I'll be sure to work on those points. Thanks for the honest review by the way and I'm glad that you liked my plot ^^ I'll credit you once I get on my laptop!
ErinKrystal
#8
Chapter 9: Thanks for the review! I'll already picked up and credited! :)