My Releif

Description

The waves crashing down on the beach were simplisitly beautiful. The way they moved, twisted and turned against the soft, fire warm wind was breath taking. The glow of the red yellow and orange sun gave of the sence of security, like when a young, innocent child hugs an adult to gain safety.

My life wasn't the best at all. My real mother died when i was only 2 years of age. Im now 18. Drugs and alcohol were my safe haven. They were there when i needed them, but when they wern't i was insane and it felt as though i was deprived of life. I have grown out of that now but my real father and my step mum abuse me and make me their slave. They are always high and they always beat me to the point of passing out or being knocked out.

My only Friend in the world was jason. Jason was a wealthy young man and was always anything but unkind. jason calls me k, short for kaylen. He sees what i am going through and doesn't like it. His parents Sara & John  took my parents to caught and  gained custordy of me so i dont have to suffer. They won.

Jason was so happy that i was free and i was too. the sceance of life and the way earths nature colides with the sun and moon, darkness and the light of day is just so amazing. Jason bought me a camera, so that i could capture the moments i see and love the most. I couldn't be more greatful.

My life is simply amazing.

Foreword

messed up again sorry but this is about a young girl who didnt have much but found the world captivating and amazing. Enjoy

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nephesh
#1
Was the foreword suppose to be the contents? If it is, I do hope you should have put it in a chapter :/

Although I'm not a native speaker, I could see some errors in the spelling and capital words.

Otherwise, this story is good :)