Bam!

Poems

Bam... Bam... Bam...

There it goes again

Circling my mind like a cheetah about to attack its pray

What should I do?

....

I'm spinning and spinning without even moving

Don't know when or where to stop

I can't control myself right now

I can't feel myself right now

All I can do is close my eyes, and make everything disappear

Bam!

What is that?

Bam!

Why doesn't it stop! 

Bam! Bam! Bam!

I'm screaming at the top of my lungs

...but no one can hear me, 

no one can help me....

Bam... Bam...

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GinniePark
#1
Chapter 15: Omg...
Please don't tell me that Eating His Lies is real bb...

But it was so amazing. Honestly. Wow. Just..asguiobagaogngaiopgno. SO inspiring.
Ogami-kun
#2
Chapter 2: OMF THISTHISTHISTHISTHIS.
I WANNA MAKE THIS A STOREHHHHHH ㅠㅠ
ABC_Hee #3
updateeeeeeee
PinkCookie
#4
Update soon
onehelllove #5
jung hyunghwa??!!

CURTE
ABC_Hee #6
i want an update! XD
GinniePark
#7
....Intense. No doubt about it.
U really are becoming better and better girl <333 ^^
Rly looking forward 2 more of ur poems~~~
However...ru okay? :/ did something happen? Poems especially r a piece of writing that always manage to reflect the <3 anyways...
GinniePark
#8
WAHHHH~~~ :O
Haha this poem is...dude I can't even...*0*
Hehe a mix of sad, happy, and in the end, realization and a bit of wisdom :D plus I love ur comparisons and similes and such <3
The confusing mixture of emotions also helps to add to that mix that love clearly is incomprehensible, just like u said ^^
Great great job Lizzy <3

Love,
Ginnie unnie ^^
GinniePark
#9
AWWWW <3
I missed ur simplistic yet touching writing ^_^ it rly makes me think a lot about love, and plus ur in a relationship urself yet uk so much about love!! :) proud of ya hehe ;)

As always, ur writing is amazing and it rly touches my heart; keep on writing dongseng, just keep on writing <3 HWAITING HWAITING~~ and congrats for coming back ^^
ABC_Hee #10
write more poems :3