Lamented

The History of a Fire Escape
when i close my eyes
i imagine 
you are never really gone
 
your veins still pulsing
heart still thumping
you still tugging and
pushing—i can feel it
 
although you are no longer here
i will remember
that your bruising fragments 
are still alive
 
and that you
are never really gone
(s.h)
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jeiuns
THOAFE: sorry everyone, i restarted because my old writing makes me cry :'(
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MyDeerLikesBacon #1
Hello there! I am pleased to inform you that your story has been included in Library of Treasures: Recommended List! I hope you would continue writing more beautiful poems and have a good day/night!

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shyami #2
Chapter 34: Yay! you updated! <3 it
shyami #3
Chapter 33: AMZING! I love it <3
www-kris-tumblr-com #4
Chapter 25: this is adorable; like a girls guide things ^^
firefighters #5
Chapter 26: Your writing is so beautiful. I hope you consider becoming an author or poet because you have a sense and way of portraying your letters into emotions that meets the eye and I cannot say how many times your writings make me cry and smile, but they are the most divine things ever. Most of them, are absolutely cute and talking about love and all those things really overwhelm me. I love your writings.
4EVABAP #6
Chapter 121: your writing perfect for producing fanfic :D
depressed-kid #7
Chapter 115: I like this because of how true it is. Tears, tears, and more tears.
shyami #8
Chapter 110: thats my same answer every time
ice-wonderland #9
Chapter 105: This is so nice omg
pizzas #10
Chapter 104: make me crY
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