Our Milieu

The History of a Fire Escape
i trail baby breath's down your stomach
and to the curve of your spine
where i ride my bike 
through the emptiness of the streets
and the bareness of the trees
 
i sneak under your skin
and lace your fingers with mine
listening to the warm sea
as i imagine we are consumed
 
but somehow you manage to sneak 
your tongue past my lips
covered in honey
desperate to make poetry
with our atoms intertwined 
 
and i will never forget 
how each hour spent beside you
represents a man
i could fall in love with
(s.h)
 
 
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jeiuns
THOAFE: sorry everyone, i restarted because my old writing makes me cry :'(

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MyDeerLikesBacon
#1
Hello there! I am pleased to inform you that your story has been included in Library of Treasures: Recommended List! I hope you would continue writing more beautiful poems and have a good day/night!

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shyami
#2
Chapter 34: Yay! you updated! <3 it
shyami
#3
Chapter 33: AMZING! I love it <3
www-kris-tumblr-com
#4
Chapter 25: this is adorable; like a girls guide things ^^
firefighters
#5
Chapter 26: Your writing is so beautiful. I hope you consider becoming an author or poet because you have a sense and way of portraying your letters into emotions that meets the eye and I cannot say how many times your writings make me cry and smile, but they are the most divine things ever. Most of them, are absolutely cute and talking about love and all those things really overwhelm me. I love your writings.
4EVABAP #6
Chapter 121: your writing perfect for producing fanfic :D
depressed-kid #7
Chapter 115: I like this because of how true it is. Tears, tears, and more tears.
shyami
#8
Chapter 110: thats my same answer every time
ice-wonderland
#9
Chapter 105: This is so nice omg
pizzas
#10
Chapter 104: make me crY