Frame of Mind

The History of a Fire Escape
if you taste my heartbeat
you would find 
juliet roses
on your tongue 
 
if you unravel my desperate skin
you would find
pomegranate seeds
underneath your limbs
 
and if you explore long enough
you would find 
the poems i hid on accident
echoing a cool tune
down your throat
(s.h)
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jeiuns
THOAFE: sorry everyone, i restarted because my old writing makes me cry :'(

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MyDeerLikesBacon
#1
Hello there! I am pleased to inform you that your story has been included in Library of Treasures: Recommended List! I hope you would continue writing more beautiful poems and have a good day/night!

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http://www.asianfanfics.com/story/view/537101/library-of-treasures-recommended-list-request-allgenres-opinion-recommendation
shyami
#2
Chapter 34: Yay! you updated! <3 it
shyami
#3
Chapter 33: AMZING! I love it <3
www-kris-tumblr-com
#4
Chapter 25: this is adorable; like a girls guide things ^^
firefighters
#5
Chapter 26: Your writing is so beautiful. I hope you consider becoming an author or poet because you have a sense and way of portraying your letters into emotions that meets the eye and I cannot say how many times your writings make me cry and smile, but they are the most divine things ever. Most of them, are absolutely cute and talking about love and all those things really overwhelm me. I love your writings.
4EVABAP #6
Chapter 121: your writing perfect for producing fanfic :D
depressed-kid #7
Chapter 115: I like this because of how true it is. Tears, tears, and more tears.
shyami
#8
Chapter 110: thats my same answer every time
ice-wonderland
#9
Chapter 105: This is so nice omg
pizzas
#10
Chapter 104: make me crY