Words Meet Heartbeats

Description

They seemed like such a cute couple, Sunny and Sungmin.

          Both of them were absolutely a d o r a b l e and their chemistry was u n d e n i a b l e.

Or was it?

Fact: Lee Sungmin and Lee SoonKyu despise each other. Their cute interactions are all an act. Sungmin loves nothing more than to tease Sunny every day, and she would like nothing more than for him to get out of her sight.

Somewhere along the way, with all the hate, it turned into something like...

          Love.

     Lee SoonKyu/Sunny: Third oldest member of SNSD (Girls' Generation) and the rival of Lee Sungmin. She's responsible for the cuteness in the group, but behind the scenes, she's rather calm and reserved. She's about to leave for Japan with the rest of the group for SNSD's Japanese promotions.

     Lee Sungmin: The middle member in Super Junior and rivals Sunny. He's also known as the cute member in his group, like Sunny. He secretly teases Sunny because of his feelings for her, but he does not realize this. He will have to make a big decision about the most important girl in his life--Sunny.


I've been debating for a while whether or not to enter this in the AFF Summer Writing Contest, but I finally decided: What the hey? :p

This is for Prompt #6: 'Cause when words meet heartbeats, baby, you'll know.

C O M M E N T, please? :) /crosses fingers

I'm not hoping to win the whole thing--duh, there's a whole lot of people WAY better than me--but I just wanted to do some writing. Hey, it sounded fun! (:

Also, thanks to my little sis, StrawberryFantasy, for creating the lovely poster. :D

- Jessica

Foreword

I don't know when the hatred started.

It might have been when we first met...

We locked eyes and it was like a spark ignited inside.

Lee Sungmin and I had to be rivals.

While everyone else in Super Junior and SNSD became close, we distanced ourselves.

Occasionally, he'd bump me in the shoulder, only to not even say sorry.

I'd accidentally kick him during dance practices.

That's how things went for a while.

But there reached a point...

Where I couldn't take it anymore.

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

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corinneniix
#1
Chapter 2: WAH THE ENDING IS SO SUPER CUTE!!! SUGEN FTW :)
Va_asianloverz
#2
Chapter 1: it is a nice chapter
please write more
thesilverstrands
#3
Chapter 3: I read anything that has sunsun in it :)
and I like this one. I really do. So stop being discourage, author :)
Keep writing. We all need Sunsun daily dose ebery day :))
-eirlys
#4
Chapter 3: i'm just finish reading this! it's sooo cute! sunsun the best !
another-summer
#5
Chapter 2: I love this!! So cuute ^_^
So like Suju and SNSD to act like this hehe XD
SecretStorywriter
#6
Chapter 2:
WAAAH~
There are so many things I love about this chapter that I can't even mention them all!
Since I'm a SuperGeneration supporter, I noticed a lot of the couples right away, which was hilarious.
The kiss was a bit cliche - the whole fireworks exploding thing and the declaration of love right there. And the fact that it was at the airport before they left. I dunno - I love fics about KPOP couples, but I enjoy them even more when they are a bit more on the realistic side. (Ex: There would have been a crapload of fans at the airport.)
My favorite scene was definitely the SUJU car ride! LOL. I love the chanting, the ring tones, the way Jessica knows Heenim so well, and just the overall choas seemed so plausible. And LOLOL at Siwon's fatherlyness. XD
SecretStorywriter
#7
Chapter 1:
ROFL Heechul: "I don't need the luck; I'm beautiful." XDD
At first I thought it was random that Sunny was mentioning Sungmin's relationship with Sooyoung, but then I realized it sounded kinda longing/jealous.
It's slightly odd that Yoona didn't call Sunny unnie; I think that Yoona is one of the younger ones who actually calls the SNSD members "unnie"... (Unlike Sooyoung xD)
I don't think there needs to be a dash in "Heechul-oppa".
I like that you stayed consistent with the actual SPAO shoot. You picked the actual clothes Heechul wore and I totally remember the SPAO video with a hugging SunSun couple in hoodies.
It's weird seeing them hostile with each other, but I'm sure they make up in the next chapter, neh?
SecretStorywriter
#8
Foreword:
I LOVE the SunSun couple!
I think I saw you on MusicChibi unnie's wall or something and ended up seeing that not only are you a SMTown biased, but you ship SuperGeneration!!!! GAHHHH~ I LOVE THEM SO MUCH.
It's so so so so nice to have someone I can spazz with!

I saw that you have HyoHyuk stories - They're my favorite kpop couple - but I thought I would with the shorter completed stories.

I think I may read this later because I feel like I'm waaaaay too tired right now and I'd probably leave you a silly comment like this one. ^^ hehe~
But just wanted to give you a heads up.
SunSunJjang #9
A Sequel would be awesome!!! Keke~