Bitterly Shattered

Description

Everything started when Hara and JunHyung started dating. But right before the couple’s relationship was officially known by the public, Hara received an anonymous letter on the very day she was about to go on a secret date with JunHyung. The letter was hand-written by someone called ‘The Broken Girl’, telling her how special her newfound love is and how lucky she is to have him. The letter was comprised of advice on how she should treat JunHyung and what she should do. Hara felt as though the writer had decided to leave the boy in her capable hands. Then it made her wonder who the anonymous writer was. Could it be a fan? Or his old love? Or perhaps… someone else?

 

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Author’s note: JunHyung and Hara are dating! This is just... $&@#^(&!9hej12@!@&)#*@)*0*#)#*!!! Yes, as you can see, this is very shocking to me! Yes, and I wasn’t very happy when I heard the news. In fact, I was devastated. I have to admit, I was freakin upset when my friend posted the ALLKPOP page at my facebook wall. I love JunHyung the most out of all the handsome Korean boys out there and it was really heartbreaking that he now has a girlfriend. I mean, who wouldn't? I'm sure that everyone who loves JunHyung feels the same way too. I wasn't able to accept the fact that he is now with Hara at the beginning. Because well... I LOVE HIM! Heck, he even beat Key. Yes, Key the diva lost to him. *Sniff Sniff* Did you guys know that JunHyung actually cried during his tour in Singapore when his fans supported him with his relationship? Awwww, my poor baby! This was actually supposed to be a oneshot or a two-shot but then it ended up being too long, so I decided to write it into a short story instead. Thisshort story is inspired by hearing the news of the couple. And this is dedicated to them too. Though this story is a sad story, I still support JunHyung with his relationship. I don’t care if he has a girlfriend, I still love him. YAY!

 

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Foreword

Some say that having admiration and love for idols is better than experiencing an unrequited one-sided love. That it’s better to love your idols because they belong to everyone, not to just to one girl. If you love them, they’ll love you back. It’s simple actually, a 'what goes around, comes around' theory. And people think that this is better than to love someone who doesn’t love you back, who won’t return your love and who would only break your heart. But is that really the case? Even if the idols return your love, can you guarantee that their hearts won’t belong to someone else? What do you think?

 

For me, it’s neither.

For me, both are heartbreaking and cruel for a fragile heart to bear.

For me, it’s what people called reality.

For me, it’s bull.

 

And do you know why? Well, you’ll have to find out yourself.

 

This is the confession of a fragile heart, the story of another unrequited love… The Broken Girl.

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paradoxicy #1
Story Title: 10/15<br />
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Comment: To be honest,I don't really get the story title...Mianhe! TT TT<br />
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Storyline: 14.5/15<br />
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Comment: This storyline is the best I've ever seen,even though I'm not a fan of B2ST.<br />
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Suggestions: Maybe you could link the title to the storyline?<br />
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Criticism: It's good,but it could use a slightly wider array of vocabulary.<br />
WOOJAE_ #2
New reader. <br />
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Fell in love after the reading her letter. it was simple yet sweet . i showed emotion yet laughable. your such a talented writer i envy. cos i at English heaps !! <br />
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Jae Mi is going through alot . from the pressure from her parents especially her mum is really stressing her. i can see her colour fade . and when she finds out about junhyung and hara i sent wanna read if its gonna make me cry :( but i shall wait for that time to come. <br />
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Oh and about your question. Rejection? Its something that hurts your pride alto. too me it does. i have sensitive eye tissue and very emotional so i tend to cry easily even by the little things. but to overcome a rejection is to cry let out the emotions/feelings piled up and smile afterwards. it takes time and the rejection is always there as a memory no matter what but you will overcome one day whether positively or negatively . <br />
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And thanks for sharing your writing to read :) can't wait for your future updates
MLWJYBJCKZJS #3
Aww~ The Beast members are so sweet! ;3
smiley105 #4
It's so good :) Update soon!
sungyoung #5
They're still together ^^ It was just rumours~ <br />
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Rejection... try to ignore the person ahahaha... then try to act normal around them.. ocassionally glare at them (when they're not looking of course~) <br />
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nice poster btw!
Generalchan #6
Long Update, thanks ^^
kminjii #7
sorry, can you make the font bigger?<br />
so hard to read T.T
lrviolet #8
I miss Junhyung already. T^T<br />
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Ahhh Hara. :]<br />
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Update soon? :))
jungminian0403 #9
aw, all of your stories are just amazing! superb! I don't regret subscribing to your stories! Aja! XP
Generalchan #10
woooah letter ^^
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