Chapter Two

Thistle
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A knock on the door at seven in the morning woke Amber from a dead sleep, and as the pounding continued she dragged herself out of bed and toward the door. Grandma was no where in sight, and so with a sigh of annoyance Amber pulled the door open to come face to face with a beautiful woman.

"Oh, uh... good morning!" The woman seemed a little taken aback by Amber's appearance, and Amber fought back the blush that threatened to spead over her face. She wore what she always did to bed, but on second thought it may have been prudent to grab a robe. The basketball shorts and oversized wife beater were comfortable but by no means pretty, and this woman...

Well. Dressed in a fitted pencil skirt and a loose flowy blouse, standing comfortably on black stilettos and every hair perfectly in place, the woman may as well have been a model. Her glasses only accentuated her features and perfect updo, and Amber resisted the urge to touch her own hair (which she was sure was standing in every direction). As they stood there, both obviously uncomfortable and unsure, Amber's Grandma came out of her bedroom, fully dressed and ready to go.

"Oh, thank you for getting the door, Amber. I see you've met my nurse, Victoria." She said as she tobbled past into the kitchen, and Amber couldn't help but look back at the beautiful woman in surprise. This... model... was a nurse?!? A kind smile met her gaze, though, and Amber nodded her head in greeting (and embarrasment).

"We're going to go to the hospital for a few tests; this is completely routine so don't worry." Victoria said quietly, and Amber nodded her head again in thanks. As they left, Grandma reminded her to please check on the garden today; the new seedling plants needed water twice a day and not too much sunlight, remember!

With a fond smile Amber shut the door only to slump against it when it was done. She felt like Shrek... like a troll... just, ugly. How frustrating! She dragged herself back down the hall and into her bedroom to get ready for the day.

After a shower and a light breakfast, Amber set to work in the garden. There was a strangely soothing feeling in the monotonous motion of pulling weeds, and so it was that when she heard another knock at the front door, she looked at her watch and realized that it was already ten. "Coming!" She called, brushing the dirt off of her knees and pulling the gloves off of her hands. She opened the door to yet another beautiful face and almost wanted to roll her eyes; were mainland Chinese just perfect or something?!? "Can I help you?"

"Oh! Uh... these, I mean this... this is for you.

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themisberry #1
Chapter 6: Awwww.. ’u hit like a girl’ get to me! Way to go lulu!!
BanaWarrior
#2
Chapter 6: I'm a simple woman. I see 'Amber' I click. And this is just so kwhdbjsjsh cute <3
And half of me is laughing because I'm more of a Krisber shipper than a Hanber shipper, but I loved this anyway. (Btw, irl If someone can have a crush on someone, my guess would be Henry having a crush on Amber, not the other way LOL /run)
princesslov27
#3
Chapter 6: This was soooooooo cute. Loved it all.
Amalya
#4
Chapter 6: Bahaha! That last line. XD Too perfect there. haha

You're right that this is one of your older fics and not as in depth or perhaps detailed as your more recent works but it's still an engaging story line. It feels like you lay it on a bit thick in the beginning with the bullying and everything, though the whole 'lesbian' and 'does so and so have a date' I could totally believe. >.> There's the case of the typos too but other than those and some extremism (including Amber's explosion on the plane), I thoroughly enjoyed the story.

I loved the way he always called her Princess and they both missed how the other looked at them pretty much every time. He was terribly sweet here and pretty much perfect for Amber. I also liked how she had to look back on everything in comparison to Luhan to really get a better understanding of how she had been with the others: the difference in friendship and affection and treatment and such. And oh how I loved when she got to her grandmother's to restore some badly needed balance and security to her life.

I'm not entirely sure that I agree with Luhan's move but it's a dreadfully romantic thing to do. And you still had me cringing and then doing the whole 'D'aw' thing on the plane. But I maintain the last line was perfect. hehe

Very nice read and it was good to see Amber getting some face time. <3
taipanda #5
Chapter 6: Owwwnnn mas.
Linda la historia ... Ojala fuera mas larga
phokyu
#6
Chapter 6: THIS STORY CAME BY SO FAST OMFG
I LOVE THIS SO MUCH. SO MUCH FEELS.
I HAVENT READ ANY STORIES FOR A
LONG TIME TO MAKE ME FEEL LIKE
IM ACTUALLY IN THE STORY
NOW I WANT TO KNOW WHAT HAPPENS
AFTER THE "HAPPILY EVER AFTER"
phokyu
#7
Chapter 5: omfg crying because its so beautiful like amber omg ;A; "'You're so beautiful.'"
phokyu
#8
Chapter 3: awe "'I could use a friend.'"
phokyu
#9
i love how you pair the two together
because of how they look! like it is so
interesting and true because some
would think amber is a guy while
some would think luhan is a girl and
with this story they are together
which is like making me speechless

im not even done reading and i am
already pulled into this story! < 3
niallophilic
#10
I ship Hanber and this just aced everything. Great story!