After I got this story reviewed, I felt as if the reviewer was right. So I took her feedback into consideration and fixed up the first chapter (although I'm not completely satisfied with it). I also added a new bit to the foreward where Chen first starts to go to the coffee shop.

I also want to thank everyone who has read the story, subscribed, and upvoted. I never expected to get that many views. I appreciate it and I am completely grateful. Thank you so much! *hands everyone their biases because you all deserve it*