Chapter 3: please don't give up on this...
hope you'll continue this...

Chapter 4: It's such a waste, I really like this story enough to subscribe and upvote! Your writing skill is just... argh. But of course I do hope you will try to complete the story, still all the best ^^

Chapter 4: authornim dont delete your story pls pls pls...your storyline is one of the kind....
i never see or read something like this....just dont give up if u need some help me or others willing to help u in sharing ideas huhu....i do hope u will continue write this story..

Chapter 4: D: i was glad when i saw the notification for this story...but why...
ah i really like the artistic feeling of this story though... :(
i hope you will continue it...

Chapter 4: I really love this story, and its really shocking:( you know me:( this is a really beautiful story and i actually really looking forward for it:( but if its really your choice, then, its okay:) hwaiting for you:)

Chapter 4: This is actually...shocking. and you're deleting your account too? Why?:(

Chapter 3: sorry i just read your fic just now... the story become more interesting than first chap... :)

Chapter 3: Wow.. I doted on this story already.. Its so soft and went straight to someone inside. I couldn't believe that this is ur first fic. Its look like u have experienced it before.

I liked how u potrey someone thru their colour.. I mean.. gosh.. I never thought of it.

Oh please update soon~

Chapter 3: i wonder about your background for writing like this... (i dont mean it in the bad way,really)
i mean, it has some kind of artistic feeling...
i really like it so far :)
its just that this chapter has less colour terminology.

Chapter 3: Hohoho~ Bedroom time. ;) /shot for being y here. =w=
I wonder who tops, but I'm hoping it's Kyu cause.. well Kyu's taller and in this story it doesn't seem to me that Kyu is a submissive person. \o/ Anyway it's your choice and I think I'll like it either way~ :D Good job on this chapter! \o/ Keep it up and update soon~! ^^