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carte blanche; drabble challenge

 

Kyungsoo traps his memories within the crumpling frame of his cardboard box.

His scribbles trace back and forth—between the yellowing photographs and burnt diaries, torn pages and smudged fineprint.

Really, today Kyungsoo speaks with nostalgia woven into the crescents of his eyes—empty walls and barren shelves wrapped with dusty fingers.

And the minutes pass with an overemotional mother and ignorant father—the occasional punch of laughter hanging thin in the austerity of surroundings.

They say their goodbyes as Kyungsoo fights against his quivering lips. The air is filled with, “I’m gonna miss you,” and “come back soon, okay?”

So the morning passes into a hot afternoon lapping at the stillness of water. Jongin’s heavy truck pulls in—clanging metals, black exhaust—and he honks for Kyungsoo.

The elder rushes down the steps, a cart of boxes and bags wheeled from behind him. And as they set off to leave, Kyungsoo’s family a disappearing distance away, Jongin asks,

“Ready for college, hyung?”

And Kyungsoo smiles in return, “nope.”

 

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officiaLinspirit
#1
Chapter 17: ouo the way you write is so vivid
I officially love you and your writing xD
officiaLinspirit
#2
Chapter 16: Yet another chapter that leaves me at a loss for words. You make my drabbles look like crap OTL.
"Kyungsoo can barely keep is own eyes open, and his breath lingers with the facade of ecstasy woven into alcohol sips (gulps)." OMG. that sentence right there. That one got me. ouo
Oh yeah, you forgot the 'h' in 'his.' ^^
But who cares, this is so beautiful xD
kagaki #3
Chapter 15: Another lovely piece of work~
kagaki #4
Chapter 12: From reading all the chapters so far, I especially like this one. My words can't expressed on how good your writing is ^^
officiaLinspirit
#5
Chapter 9: How long have you been writing to be this good?!
officiaLinspirit
#6
Chapter 5: These are all so beautiful ouo. I...I...(speechless)
craisin
#7
Chapter 8: I hate you
lovelesspanda
#8
Chapter 3: YOU. ARE. AWESOME. TT-----TT your writing style is so daebak ; ;
craisin
#9
Chapter 7: I LIKE THIS ONE TOO
craisin
#10
Chapter 6: I LIKE THIS ONE