xvi. thanks

carte blanche; drabble challenge

 

“Woah, you need to calm down, Soo,” Jongin whispers under his breath, his arms twitching under Kyungsoo’s weight.

Kyungsoo can barely keep his own eyes open, and his breath lingers with the façade of ecstasy woven into alcohol sips (gulps).

Once in a while, Kyungsoo screws up. And their relationship turns three hundred and sixty; Jongin is the fixer, Kyungsoo is the mess.

Kyungsoo hates himself for the way he is—hypocritical in his comments about how Jongin is so ‘unorganised and lazy’, how Jongin needs to ‘get his life sorted out’.

But Jongin doesn’t mind that his lover screws up once in a while, with bleeding knuckles and glass shreds embedded into the kill of his tongue.

And so, in the morning, when Kyungsoo wakes up to Jongin’s smooth kisses—each touch remains calm on top of his burning cigarette wounds—he can’t help but to smile apologetically.

Then, Kyungsoo will hurriedly mumble, “thanks,” before falling back into his painful hangover.

 

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officiaLinspirit
#1
Chapter 17: ouo the way you write is so vivid
I officially love you and your writing xD
officiaLinspirit
#2
Chapter 16: Yet another chapter that leaves me at a loss for words. You make my drabbles look like crap OTL.
"Kyungsoo can barely keep is own eyes open, and his breath lingers with the facade of ecstasy woven into alcohol sips (gulps)." OMG. that sentence right there. That one got me. ouo
Oh yeah, you forgot the 'h' in 'his.' ^^
But who cares, this is so beautiful xD
kagaki #3
Chapter 15: Another lovely piece of work~
kagaki #4
Chapter 12: From reading all the chapters so far, I especially like this one. My words can't expressed on how good your writing is ^^
officiaLinspirit
#5
Chapter 9: How long have you been writing to be this good?!
officiaLinspirit
#6
Chapter 5: These are all so beautiful ouo. I...I...(speechless)
craisin
#7
Chapter 8: I hate you
lovelesspanda
#8
Chapter 3: YOU. ARE. AWESOME. TT-----TT your writing style is so daebak ; ;
craisin
#9
Chapter 7: I LIKE THIS ONE TOO
craisin
#10
Chapter 6: I LIKE THIS ONE