Troublemaker.

Description

Choi Junhong, better known as Zelo, is quite a handful. He’s an only child that comes from a wealthy family and a well-known troublemaker.  The trouble and problems he causes increase and so his father decides to hire a personal bodyguard/babysitter to watch over his son all the time.

 

 

Characters:

Zelo

Choi Junhong aka Zelo

17 years old

Loves skateboarding, dancing, rapping and cherry tomatoes

Is quite a handful, wealthy, childish and the popular and handsome guy every girl wants to date

 

 

Himchan

Kim Himchan

? years old

Loves iced americano and cheeseburgers

Is the motherly type that seems rather strict and quiet

 

 

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Foreword

Hey-oh you lovely people (:

I wanted to write a fanfic for a long time now, but somehow I was always bussy or lacked ideas and yeah... I guess you know what I mean (:

However since I fortunately gratuated in the middle of June and am now seeking work I've got pleeenty of time and then suddenly an idea popped up when I was bored to death yesterday. Guess it's fate (:

So here I am with my first fanfic ever 'Troublemaker.'. (I'm quite nervous, actually :o)

I really hope you'll enjoy the story and that it won't be too boring. If you have any suggestions how I could improve the fic, make it more exciting etc. or notice grammar-errors, please don't hesitate to tell me (:

Constructive criticism (well, actually criticism in general) is desired (:

Lots of love, Bianca ♥

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kelkua #1
Chapter 8: i so love ur story...pls keep updating <3
Kirichan #2
Chapter 8: Ooooh new chapter please *-* pleaseeeee
Kirichan #3
Chapter 8: Im waiting for the next chapter soooo soooo bad *-*
drownthenoise #4
Chapter 5: Ich misch mich da mal unauffällig ein und weise dich darauf hin, dass du das vielleicht nochmal durchlesen solltest. Ich hab nicht alles glesn, aber Beistriche, Bibi. Und am Anfang waren auch ein paar Rechtschreibfehler drin ->constructive criticism und so. Hat aber alles nix mim Inhalt zu tun, weil Menschen und Pairing, nein danke ^^
Kirichan #5
Chapter 8: Oooooh i love it *-* thank you sooooo much *-* i hope that you will bring the next chapter earlier*-*
babymallory #6
Chapter 8: Yayyayyayayayay!!!!!! It's so good, keep up the hard work!! :D
Melody123 #7
Chapter 8: Finally an update!!!!!!!!
This chapter was so cute, omg!!! Himchan and Zelo together are just... UGH!! PERFECT!!!!!!
Kirichan #8
Chapter 7: Oh i really loved this fic. I would like to read more. Please *_*
Kirichan #9
Chapter 7: oh *-* Yongguk cute and Zelo too. :)
guiltone #10
Yey! You made a HimLo! I love how Himchan is a little cold at the beginning, but then he began to warm up a bit, and teased Zelo. Tsk, tsk, Baby Jello, you really should stop day dreaming about your Hyung, neh? I'm glad Himchan was there to save the day, though, even though, in the end, Zelo got upset. I really love this. But, I hope you won't make Himchan warm up too fast on Zelo, since our baby still need to be taught a lesson. Haha. XD Love DaeJae, and 4D Jonguppie! Keep going and good luck, Biancer! ^^V
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