The Mourning Sableye

Description

They say that when you look a Sableye in the eyes, it will steal your soul. I guess since it looks like a little alien, people mistake it to be evil or scary. But this Pokémon is known to be more playful than supernatural.

Most of the time.

Josh and his friend, Max, are about to encounter some Sableye, but they're not happy, they're in mourning.

The two friends are going to find out the truth behind the Lavender Town's superstition.

Foreword

The floor creaked. Max and Josh snapped their heads in the direction it came from, but nothing moved. It seemed that the Pokémon were purposely trying to scare them. Max swallowed thickly as he tiptoed forward, Josh following closely behind. Both were constantly looking around for any forms of life, specifically some Sableye. The little moonlight that came from the open door aided with that. Nothing was in there though. The two friends looked at each other and decided that this adventure's time was over.

But just as they turned around to head towards the door, their only means of exit suddenly slammed shut, making the two of them scream in terror. Max ran over and grabbed the handle, desperately trying to open the door, but it wouldn't budge. On the walls and ceiling, light scurrying and maniacal laughing could be heard. Overtaken by fear, Max ran over and held on to Josh. For a few moments, their scared breathing was the only sound, until Josh let out a very frightened gasp. Max looked over in the direction Josh was looking, and froze on the spot.

There in the darkness, were two gem-shaped eyes glowing a blood-red.


Note:

It's been an on-going desire of mine to write about Pokémon while stripping it of its child-like innocence yaaaaay childhood ruiner XD

But there's so much potential for mature material in Pokémon. I just hope I won't disappoint even myself,,,(_ _)~*

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YouDunnoMe #1
wow good fic !!
BlackRockShooter45
#2
Chapter 1: the top picture is really creepy like heck
BlackRockShooter45
#3
Chapter 1: OMG THIS STORY IS SO AWESOME. I am so glad i read this in the morning or i would have nightmares like hell. I LOVE POKEMON AND THIS IS ONE OF THE BEST POKEMON STORIES IVE READ EVER SO GOOD. I LOVE THE FACT THAT IT WAS ALSO SAD BUT IN THE END IT WASNT SAD ANYMORE (why am i writing in caps?)
JEONJUNGK00K #4
Chapter 1: OMG THIS IS TOO AMAZING. YOU ACTUALLY MADE A STORY OUT OF POKEMON AND I ACTUALLY LOVE POKEMON SFM OMFG /SCREAMS/ THIS IS TOO AMAZING OMG /STANDING OVATION
luv_kero
2446 streak #5
Chapter 1: Oh my goodness, this certainly gave me the shivers! >o< This is the first time I've read such a Pokemon story and I really liked it! ^-^ I've always been in freaky supernatural events and the whole Sableye superstition is very interesting. You give a lot of rich details which helped me picture exactly what was going on during the story and that's not an easy feat, so kudos to you for an amazing work! :)