Confrontation

Description

In every village, there is a man or woman of power, one who is in contact with the spirits, called the Anaku. They can use their gifts and training to heal and protect the people, or they can also choose to torment the villagers and be a tyrant. Mino had been the type of Anaku who tried to use his power to help his people, but then one day, a very powerful Anaku makes a visit with some very deadly weapons.

Foreword

Ahead of him, Mino could see the form of another Anaku, and that gave him pause; usually, when Anaku came to confront other Anaku, they would assume the form of the animal they most identified with, though it would be blatantly obvious that it was a metamorphosis either through increased size or the display of their powers. Never had Mino seen an Anaku coming to another village in his own form before, and this worried him even more. Was this man that confident in his assault? In any case, the evil things were approaching the villagers, and Mino didn’t have much time left.

The other Anaku looked down in Mino’s direction and smiled evilly, as if he was waiting for this exact moment.

“It has taken you long enough,” the other Anaku chuckled.

Mino transformed back into his human form and took an offensive stance. “You are not welcome here, neither are your minions.”

The other Anaku chuckled again and turned away. Mino was taken aback yet again. In a confrontation, you could not trust anyone behind your back, because they could have the earth swallow you up, or throw a spear at you. The arrogance of this other Anaku was infuriating, but Mino tried to keep his calm.

“My name is Seungyoon, if you didn’t know,” the other Anaku turned his head and proclaimed. “Also, you and I share the same father.”

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Amalya #1
Chapter 1: This was certainly an interesting oneshot. It feels very much as if there should be more with an ending like that and I wonder if you will continue it later. Beyond that, it's a fascinating premise. I'm curious about Anakus now. How did they come to be? What is the extent of their power? How does one become an Anaku? And ultimately, what will happen between the two half-brothers now? I certainly don't think Seungyoon ever meant for his plan to be any kind of mercy for Mino, which makes it strange for him to say such a thing, but it was definitely effective in shaping Mino into what he's becoming. I'm also curious why he wasn't able to heal or affect the sick in any way. So many questions! But not a bad read at all. I like the idea of there being spirits and having one who can commune with them. I would have liked to see a bit more in terms of power usage but it was still a pretty good beginning. Like I said, I do hope there's a bit more but if not, well done overall. ^_^

And welcome back. ;)
chuchu94 #2
Is that Mino THIS Song Mino?
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