Strikeout

Traveling the World with Kim Jaejoong and Jung Yunho

[ Hara's POV ] 

 

The time Yunho and I had together on the plane had a very different atmosphere than from the first day. Before it was angry and frustrated. But this time it was just plain awkward (for me, at least, since all Yunho really did was act all flirty).

The boxes he gave me yesterday were inside my bag. My plan was to return them to him, but I just couldn't find the right moment. The whole time he was acting like such a flirt, it sickened me (heh. He thought I had fallen for him instantly after yesterday. He may be disappointed.). After hours and hours of putting up with his constant (and insanely annoying) flirting, the plane finally landed. I let out a sigh of relief (and also frustration) and walked off the plane.

He suddenly grabbed my hand (does he seriously not realize that I'm not interested?) and said, "You're so pretty, my eyes are blinded. I like you." He pulled me in close (and at the same time I prepared myself to resist if he tried to do anything weird) and looked into my eyes passionately (the cheesiness and drama-like moment was so retarded) and said, "Won't you be mine?"

I blinked once. Twice. Three times. "Are you... asking me to be your girlfriend?"

He nodded with a smirk. "Well...?"

I paused for a little bit and stuttered when I tried to speak. When I finally pushed past the thoughts in my head of how much I hated him for acting like such a conceited player, I finally regained awareness of the moment and replied honestly. "I... I can't date someone I hardly know..."

His smirk morphed into a confused, displeased expression. "Is that a 'no' ?"

"I'm... I'm sorry," I said nervously, "I hope you understand." I looked down and stiffly walked away.

"Do you realize who you just rejected?" he said angrily. I stopped to turn and look at him.

(... really? Is he that full of himself?) "I'm sorry..." I murmured as I turned away from his confused, frustrated face and continued walking (I wish I could be more straightforward like Nicole, but I can't bring myself to be mean, even if it's someone like him).

Goodbye, Jung Yunho.


 

< out of character > 

I just wanted to thank you guys for reading ^^ I hope you guys enjoy the story so far (: don't forget to leave feedback in the comments, it's very appreciated (: sorry I haven't been updating too often, I'm on vacation and I haven't had very much time. But I've got more time on my hands now, so expect a lot of updates soon, and I've been planning out the story on paper with the time I can't be on the computer.

Thanks again (: 

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babysun576 #1
love it
do update :)
lovechocolate
#2
try using my advice, if u just write words, instead of a story it feels like an essay, LOVE THE STORY.
If u want an example, just check this out:
http://www.asianfanfics.com/story/view/128088/7/can-t-you-love-me-key-korean-romance-schoollove-shinee-taemin-you
lovechocolate
#3
can i give u an advice? its JUST AN ADVICE i am not trying to be mean or y.
Advice: At times, add pics of the characters' clothes and the things that are around them it helps the reader imagine a bit better
nyansuju
#4
I LURRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRVE YOU
jonghyunfan #5
haha I just found this fic and I am reading and loving it! I don't really ship Yunho and Hara together, but the story is good! please keep them coming. thank you!
ChickenPipi #6
Oh my! They are Happy and hurt at the same time. I know Gyul is aminor charactor but i didn't think that she would play a dead role. Anyways your fic is great. Jaejoong treats Nicole better and Yunho confesses to Hara. P,ease update soon
ilikecheese
#7
sooo... not exactly the way i thought gyuri would be in the story but at least shes here LOLLL<br />
jaejoong and nicole ftw!!! and yunho and hara buttt i like the jaejoong nicole paring better (:
miekoleiko #8
lol, love the “Damn it you guys, not now!” –slams door- line. i can actually see that happening. can't wait for the next update!
HelloMisterTH
#9
I'm still reading keke~~ <br />
Can't wait till Hara and Yunho get closer. Update soon and take your time with the story :)