Ashtray Heart

Description

Minho cheated. And now he regrets it dearly.

Foreword

There’s a vague, little voice in the back of his head screaming its lungs out loud. He can’t comprehend the meaning of its words though, not when those plump, sweet, so unknown lips press against his own in their first kiss. His mind’s only getting more and more blank as the pressure on his lips intensifies and he loses control over his body; his hands roam over warm, solid flesh (soft soft soft it should be soft and fragile oh shut up why do you even care), dip into foreign curves, tug on the hazel locks (blond blond they should be blond who are you kidding); his fingers burn at the contact, they’re so hungry for the skin, for the body so willingly given to him with no second thoughts (you sick bastard), his lips swallow each gasp, moan, groan that is vocalized by him and the other one—
(it’s not that voice it’s not the voice you should be hearing right now you sick bastard)
—and then there’s the fire that burn their connected bodies that move in quick, feverish pace, so overwhelmed with want and ache to release and yet, at the same time, desiring to make this moment last as long as it can.
(it’s not like you you don’t do it this way you’re always the one in control)
Their pants synchronize into one as they quickly near the highest peak of it all. That’s when his usually raspy from screaming the other’s name (it’s not him it’s not him what the hell are you doing) voice gives out and forms a weak, silent yelp, followed by a series of irregular breaths (you don’t even know his ing name you don’t know what name to scream out loud).
The last thing he’s conscious of is the soft press of wet lips on his sweaty forehead and an unsteady rise and fall of a bare chest.
Then the last effects of the alcohol and the burnout take over him and he falls into a deep slumber.
Little does he know what consequences it’s going to have in the near future.

 

 

I decided to publish my lj fics here as well. My lj username is same as the aff one. This fic was inspired by the image you can see up there. I'm going to update it daily, since it's a finished story. Enjoy!

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jrockow93
#1
Chapter 14: Omg i wasn't sure if it would end up onho or 2min... And omg Jinki baby
FlamingMe
#2
Chapter 14: i love 2min but onho in this story is just ♡_♡ loved this story. felt sorry for taemin tho... but it was nice that he found someone to replace minho hahaha
kalekale #3
Chapter 14: This is a very good story but i have to say this, i mean i was like what is happening?? the ending is beyond rushed. Jinki just forgives him,okay with words 'it takes months for Jinki to trust again ...' but i read all the chapters at once and i have to say this, the ending is really out of place, it stands out in a bad way. please dont just ban i mean i like your stories i just had to say this
AmoraSuteki #4
Chapter 14: So amazingly good you had me screaming the whole time haha
oconje #5
Chapter 14: I've read this on LJ and loved it just as much on AFF. I'm so happy you ended it Onho. Taemin didnt really need Minho like Jinki did. Dont mind the 2min complaints...so greedy as there are plenty of 2min fics out there and just not enough Onho. Anyhoo, I'm sure I'll be reading this again as I loved it so.
b2astly
#6
Chapter 14: I loved this story. It was unique and amazing. I admit I was a little confused by the end (is jinki the universe?) but it was fitting to the story
amazing work
b2astly
#7
Chapter 13: I love this story so so so so much!! But tht quote about choosing the second person because if u loved the first enough u wouldn't fall again, did u come up with tht? Can I know where u got it??
anxiously awaiting tomorrow :)
WickedThunder02
#8
Chapter 13: omo~ poor Taeminnie TT__TT
where's his happy ending?
Anna_Kraft #9
Chapter 12: I feel really sorry for Taemin... But JinKi, poor innocent soul T_T How Minho could do this to him, well, to both of them?!
Hope it'll be happy ending for three of them, 'cause they already suffered enough!
WickedThunder02
#10
Chapter 12: i'll be so depressed if 2min don't end up together at the end. :(
if they don't, could you write a sequel of TaeKai?! that'd be awesome lol