Chapter 10: My own opinion, this chapter is so cruel, i dont know what to say more.....

Chapter 17: i was smiling all the time i read the chaps. it's hard not to smile while imagining them doing what's in the story ^^
there are some sentences that need grammar correction, though. i suggest you to proofread before posting the stories :)

Chapter 17: love the way you write about hyunseung and bigbang. it's just lovely...

Chapter 14: he rlly kissed him? nonoooooooooooooooooooooooo

Chapter 13: ehh say leh...

Chapter 12: ohh so nice !!!! i love it. so touching.

Chapter 13: I wanna see Top with gaho or boss scenario.. haha i think it would be pretty cute

Chapter 10: just when i wanted to request for dae's struggle to his accident. i have a future vision lmao.
how about bae's thoughts of his past thoughts of wanting to be a hip-hop artist instead of an idol? ^^

Chapter 10: noo daesung...baby don't cry...
aha my corny instincts creepin.
ok seungri. that was just EPIC.

Chapter 8: WHAAT THE....
taeyang got deized.
BUT. i like it that he actually takes pregnancy as good news. the rest(maybe not daesung)would take it as a scandal.
whoo! good job mang. u never fail to surprise me.