Always and Forever

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Fiction. None of it is real anymore.

I trusted her. She let me down.

Was I any better? I was supposed

to protect her. I failed. The promise

is over. We are over. But never in my heart.

In my heart she is here with me. That is why I am

writing this story. So that even if she isn't with me anymore,

she always will be. The only difference being...she will never leave.

And the ending will be happy. She will be mine...always and forever.

Foreword

"Jun Hyung?" She asked me with sparkling eyes.

"Yes?" I asked while slinging my arm around her.

"Lets promise that we will always be there for each other. No matter what."

"Always," I replied happily.

"And forever."

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Hey guys! I'm now writing a Beast  fiction based on their new

song Fiction. Some parts will be his written story, others

how his life really is.  The story will be italicized, his real life will

be in regualar print. Please subscribe and comment and tell me how

you truly feel! And if you're in the mood for comedy, please feel free to check out my other story:

The Naughty Adventures of Low Self- confidence Boy and Alien Girl.

http://www.asianfanfics.com/story/view/13357/the-naughty-adventures-of-low-self-confidence-boy-and-alien-girl-comedy-jonghyun-key-minho-onew-shinee-taemin

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BlueBang #1
Chapter 5: Hey I really like your story update as soon as possible ~ ♥ oh and ...
omg ! NOOOOOO !
pandasockSJ #2
@wtfelicia- Yes, yes she did! I didn't want the whole story to be depressing! Yeah, I did try to make her as cute as possible. Though, Jun Hyung does outshine her cuteness any day!<br />
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@Jaimee- INDEED! Aw, thank you! The accident actually does have more meaning as you will see in the next few chapters. HAHA! I know! And the little sister was like: WTF? I like how you always reply with: Hwaiting. It's pretty fab! <br />
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@Jeniscool100- Thank you. I do try! And yes, she has been. And yes, I have been. What, you thought that she was dead? That's...a good idea. I just might use that. Or not. I do love a happy ending, though!
jeniscool100 #3
Whaaaaaaaaaat? She's been alive this whole time?!?! <br />
YOU WERE HOLDING OUT ON US, GIRL! ;D <br />
I really loved Junhyung at the end having a mini spazz and running out of the apartment! WOOOHOOO, I can't wait to see their first interaction!(: <br />
You write so so well! Your word choice is great and so is your sentence structure. I really do enjoy reading this story soooooo much! :]<br />
I can't wait for your next update! I just know that it's gonna be AWESOME, just like this one was! :3 ♥
Jaimee #4
You're welcome :) I love commenting on this story!!<br />
SO she is alive!! and she's looking for Junhyung!! Junhyung but be like the happiest guy in the world right now ^_^<br />
I thought you did good when you portrayed the accident in the last chapter :)<br />
haha Junhyung is such a spazz screaming, SHE'S AT MY APARTMENT out of nowhere :P<br />
HURRY!! Go and get your girl back Junhyung!! :D<br />
GREAT update!! I thought that this one was really exciting!! :)<br />
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HWAITING~!<br />
wtfelicia #5
she went to his apartment!? >.< and the sister.. so cute
pandasockSJ #6
@Jaimee- Thank you so much for your AMAZING comments! Well, like the in the music video when Jung Hyung "saw" the girl, he was just imagining her. But honestly, I really don't know anything about the girl yet, I'm making it all up as I go! Yeah. I probably portrayed the accident in a really failure way but, I'll make it have a point in the story! Jun Hyung is pretty stupid! I'm probs totally overdoing his heartbroken-ness but it'll play out in the end...I hope.
Jaimee #7
Thanks!! your pretty awesome for writing this amazing story!!!<br />
so is the girl dead?? hmm this is interesting... ^_^<br />
OH!!! I just had an epiphany!! That was when Kyuhyun from Super Junior got into that accident and it was really sad!! I remember because it was HUGE! I remember reading something that said that Leeteuk kept on saying Kyuhyun as he was taken to the hospital :'( it was really sad!<br />
i understand that Junhyung is heartbroken but does he have to be that stupid?!?<br />
But AMAZING update I loved <333<br />
I can't wait for the next update!! HWAITING~!!
pandasockSJ #8
@jeniscool100: Your comment just blew my mind. You caught things that I was doing that I didn't even realize that I was doing. That doesn't make sense, but I don't care! Jeniscool100, you are cool100!
jeniscool100 #9
OH MY GOD! I love how the member of Beast is not a member of Beast and is instead listening to Beast on his ipod! THAT JUST BLEW MY MIND! :D<br />
And WOW! You write so well!(: And some of your themes going on here are quite interesting! Like, my favorite line in this chapter was:<br />
"Men don't cry. It's the test of dignity." Analyzing gender roles? DANG GIRL! I love that you're breaking convention! :P <br />
Keep up the great work! You're absolutely awesomely amazing! ♥<br />
I can't wait for your next update! :3 <br />
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