A Walk

Always and Forever

"Ahhh!!! Put me down!" She screamed as I lifted her and spun her around in a circle.

"But you are so cute when you're in the air," I while chuckling.She held onto me tighter.

"It's not funny! Please put me down," She pleaded with her hands together.

"Alright, alright! But only because you are very convincing when you beg," I said as I set her back down on the ground. Though, her

feet somehow slipped up from behind her and she tilted backward, about to fall. Her arms were flailing around, searching for something to grasp onto.

Swiftly, I caught her with one arm and stared deeply into her eyes to comfort her.

"Are you okay?" I asked.

"As long as you don't let go, yes." She replied softly as she gazed back into my eyes. I felt my heart beating wildly
in my chest. I smiled and leaned down toward her pink lips....
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"Jun Hyung! Would you stop writing already! It's been hours!" Yoseob partially suggested, partially demanded me as he slammed my book closed.

I glared at him then grabbed his collar and lifted my fist in the air, "You are a dead man."

"Ah!" Yoseob squeaked while squirming around, trying to find his way out of my grasp. Useless. Then someone yanked Yoseob away from me and pulled me away from my desk.

"Stop it, Jun Hyung! You have been acting violent and completely intolerable these past few weeks! Don't just sit behind your desk and write all day! Go live life as it truly is! It's a beautiful day today. Go for a walk. We'll come with you," Hyung Seung scolded me and slung his arm around Yoseob, comforting his cowardly self.

"Fine. I'll go for a walk. But I'm going alone," I said through gritted teeth. No one understands me or what I'm going through.

I could hear faint sounds sounds of laughter and joy coming from my apartment. Why do all my roommates have all the fun? Why am I so miserable all the time?
 
I didn't used to be. As I passed by the window of the apartment, I glanced inside and heard Yoseob crying, "It was so scary!"

I sighed, "What a baby."
 

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BlueBang #1
Chapter 5: Hey I really like your story update as soon as possible ~ ♥ oh and ...
omg ! NOOOOOO !
pandasockSJ
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@wtfelicia- Yes, yes she did! I didn't want the whole story to be depressing! Yeah, I did try to make her as cute as possible. Though, Jun Hyung does outshine her cuteness any day!<br />
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@Jaimee- INDEED! Aw, thank you! The accident actually does have more meaning as you will see in the next few chapters. HAHA! I know! And the little sister was like: WTF? I like how you always reply with: Hwaiting. It's pretty fab! <br />
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@Jeniscool100- Thank you. I do try! And yes, she has been. And yes, I have been. What, you thought that she was dead? That's...a good idea. I just might use that. Or not. I do love a happy ending, though!
jeniscool100 #3
Whaaaaaaaaaat? She's been alive this whole time?!?! <br />
YOU WERE HOLDING OUT ON US, GIRL! ;D <br />
I really loved Junhyung at the end having a mini spazz and running out of the apartment! WOOOHOOO, I can't wait to see their first interaction!(: <br />
You write so so well! Your word choice is great and so is your sentence structure. I really do enjoy reading this story soooooo much! :]<br />
I can't wait for your next update! I just know that it's gonna be AWESOME, just like this one was! :3 ♥
Jaimee #4
You're welcome :) I love commenting on this story!!<br />
SO she is alive!! and she's looking for Junhyung!! Junhyung but be like the happiest guy in the world right now ^_^<br />
I thought you did good when you portrayed the accident in the last chapter :)<br />
haha Junhyung is such a spazz screaming, SHE'S AT MY APARTMENT out of nowhere :P<br />
HURRY!! Go and get your girl back Junhyung!! :D<br />
GREAT update!! I thought that this one was really exciting!! :)<br />
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HWAITING~!<br />
wtfelicia #5
she went to his apartment!? >.< and the sister.. so cute
pandasockSJ
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@Jaimee- Thank you so much for your AMAZING comments! Well, like the in the music video when Jung Hyung "saw" the girl, he was just imagining her. But honestly, I really don't know anything about the girl yet, I'm making it all up as I go! Yeah. I probably portrayed the accident in a really failure way but, I'll make it have a point in the story! Jun Hyung is pretty stupid! I'm probs totally overdoing his heartbroken-ness but it'll play out in the end...I hope.
Jaimee #7
Thanks!! your pretty awesome for writing this amazing story!!!<br />
so is the girl dead?? hmm this is interesting... ^_^<br />
OH!!! I just had an epiphany!! That was when Kyuhyun from Super Junior got into that accident and it was really sad!! I remember because it was HUGE! I remember reading something that said that Leeteuk kept on saying Kyuhyun as he was taken to the hospital :'( it was really sad!<br />
i understand that Junhyung is heartbroken but does he have to be that stupid?!?<br />
But AMAZING update I loved <333<br />
I can't wait for the next update!! HWAITING~!!
pandasockSJ
#8
@jeniscool100: Your comment just blew my mind. You caught things that I was doing that I didn't even realize that I was doing. That doesn't make sense, but I don't care! Jeniscool100, you are cool100!
jeniscool100 #9
OH MY GOD! I love how the member of Beast is not a member of Beast and is instead listening to Beast on his ipod! THAT JUST BLEW MY MIND! :D<br />
And WOW! You write so well!(: And some of your themes going on here are quite interesting! Like, my favorite line in this chapter was:<br />
"Men don't cry. It's the test of dignity." Analyzing gender roles? DANG GIRL! I love that you're breaking convention! :P <br />
Keep up the great work! You're absolutely awesomely amazing! ♥<br />
I can't wait for your next update! :3 <br />