Chapter 5: It was really insightful, the way you said 'good' is how you define it, and that an ambitious plot is useless if the writer doesn't have the skills to colour the story in...
P.S. Lovie, it's Tolstoy with a y, not i. : )

Chapter 14: I just had the laugh of my life. God, I loved this!

Chapter 7: I think that you should do a reviewer workshop just cause some reviewer only give harsh critics but fail in helping writers to write better and show them how they should correct their mistake instead. Its all just 'your story is boring, I didn't even finish it so 8/100' poor those writers (like me)

Chapter 18: yay! you updated. i enjoy reading this a lot you know? your writing guide is so detailed and-- what can i do is only to say thank you for putting a lot of effort into this. writing about gangster may seem to be interesting but after reading this--

nope. it seems hella hard ;_; maybe later. but really thought, thank you.

Chapter 17: Emoticons in stories are the most annoying things ever, the story loss all appeal to me when it has emoticons.

To be honest, there is no right way to use emoticons.

Chapter 13: these are helpful ;_; i wish i had found this earlier, now i have to edit my fic e u e

Chapter 10: yessh, the 'never unsubscribe' rules killed me ;_; it just added the clutter in my subscription list and i get notified for update for other person's request (which is completely unimportant)
i have to wait until there's 'complete' sign appear beside the title of the shop on my subscription list, and my reaction: "finally!! freedoooom!" *unsubscribe*

Chapter 2: i love the way you write this, it makes me reflect the last sentences you put here.
and yep.
that's really are two different thing.
and now i am reminded of my old story, i think i am going to check it out (and possibly) rewrite it as well.
think i'm gonna fall in love with this guide ;_;