The Sound of the Old Train

Description

Love is a word that should be said.
Sungjong has his reasons to believe so, and Myungsoo has his reasons to justify otherwise.
Whilst Myungsoo grieves over his parents’ death, Sungjong’s heart yearns his parents’ attention. 
However, that isn’t even the least of their problems. When Sungjong met Myungsoo on the old train, he became aware of his weakness and revealed his own. Understanding the fact that Myungsoo could just be his only friend, he began to make a connection. A connection which all led to the sound of the old train: chugga-chugga.
 

Foreword

 
Their feelings began on an old train...
Their feelings of love and longingness...
 
 
From the corner of my eyes, I spotted something different.

"Hello, I'm Myungsoo," he introduced with a half-perfect smile.

As I turned my head towards him, my eyes widened in shock. I sat there staring intensely at his other half. I wasn't sure if I was supposed to be scared or amused because the sound of the train was playing through my heart.

"Ah, I see you didn't expect to see my other half," he whispered looking down.

"How?" The words didn't come out as well as I imagined. It was worse than a whisper. For a second, I forgot my weakness.

"Is it that ghastly?” He began to explain.

I didn't take much in. His face was just haunting. I was traumatized to see one half look so perfect and the other look so repulsive.

 


Credits:
Originally a 'ZeroPrincess' fic but the dongsaeng of the group gave the story up for me :)
Thank you to kittyxluvlee for giving me so much help and suggestions to improve :)
Thank you to -gray @ dimensional designs for the poster and background. 
VS-SFORM-L30
two more chapters left. finished writing the base but need to develop on it a bit :/

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shukurimu_daisuki
#1
Chapter 5: wow it took then 8 freakin years (?) to be together. Since it is cliffhanger i assumed they're together finally. But bittersweet love is better because they tend to last longer/forever. I like this fic. thanks for writing is. Though it's a waste you need to leave aff..
AznDuckies #2
Chapter 5: Yay they finally meet YES OMG OM SOOOOO HAPPPY
AznDuckies #3
Chapter 4: OMG NOOO sungjong BUY ANOTHER PLANE TICKET AND HEAD BACK GO GO GO I DEMAND I DO THAT OMO NOOOOOOOOO
-dyes-
Smile-cheeks
#4
Chapter 3: WHOAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAH THAT WAS CUTEEEEEEEEE! <3 Myungjong's moments <3333333333333
I hope that he will come back soon :) But now he will become handsome as real Kim Myungsoo O.O IT'S NOT GOOD! Because Sungjong can feel as the only abnormal o.o I hope everything will be good :D
Anyway, thanks <3 Update again~ FIGHTING <3
shukurimu_daisuki
#5
Chapter 3: wow, this story really hooked me up. I really love it. The way you portrayed the details are fascinating. Usually, some authors picked words that really hard to understand especially for me, a non english speaker.So I ended up not reading it. But for this story, I understand it well despite all the details. Really love it. I hope you'll update soon. :)

oh, for the chapter, I don't think we can stop myungsoo's departure. I just hope nothing change when he get back.. :( or maybe sungjong can follow him..hehe
hanagoun #6
Chapter 3: ...Myungsoo, you are beautiful, even with half a face.
I don't care if others tease you or bully you in the past because of your face but you have one friend: Sungjong
Please just comfort him, as you are the only person he's got
(otl, I feel like I'm actually talking to Myungsoo = =")