Your Story Is... Perfect... (Not)

Description

Your story, is indeed very appealing and fantastic which makes me want to read more of it. 
Well, the above thought, is indeed very rare now days in me.

Thus I thought, 
why not tell all the fantastic authors what is wrong with their fanfictions?

Thus bringing that thought into action,
cheetosmoontos who is also an author somewhere else on Asianfanfics,
presents you with...

"Your Story... Is... Perfect... (Not)"

 

Foreword

I might be criticizing, which some sensitive or arrogant ones might consider bashing, the usage of grammar and all sorts of literally devices that you most probably can relate on.

If you can't bear any of that, please turn back.

Please.

All right, you brave ones, go ahead and continue on scrolling down your mouse or your screen or your fingers.

Fiddling minds into action!
 

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TaeminIsBigHeart
#1
Chapter 2: thank you so much for covering this up!! :)) now i know when i should limit myself in using 'a' or 'an' :))