Last Goodbye

Long Lost FRIEND

*At Kirin*

 

Suzy: (sigh) 

Taecyeon: Yah! Suzy-ah!

Suzy: Oh! Taec. Wae?

Taecyeon: Nothing.

Suzy: Taec!

Taecyeon: Neh?

Suzy: U-uhmmmm.

Taecyeon: Wae? 

Suzy: Nevermind. 

Taecyeon: Tss. 

Wooyoung: Taec!

Taecyeon: Neh?

Wooyoung: SooHyun texted me. 

Suzy: SooHyun? (she thought to herself)

Taecyeon: Ahh. he wants us to go to his house?

Wooyoung: Neh! 

Suzy: Yah!

Wooyoung: Wae?

Suzy: did you say "SOOHYUN"?

Wooyoung: A-ahneeoh!

Taecyeon: Uh-oh!

Suzy: tell me! 

Wooyoung: Yah! It's none of your business! Let's go Taec!

Taecyeon: Ok. 

Suzy: SooHyun? SooHyun? SooHyun? 

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Jb: Today is Saturday. 

Jiyeon: When is Car.....I mean SooHyun. When is SooHyun's flight?

Jb: Monday.

Jiyeon: Ahh.

Jb: He texted me to go to his house.

Jiyeon: are you coming?

Jb: Of course. For me this is his last day.

Jiyeon: (nod) Wait. did suzy knows that carl is soohyun?

Jb: No.

Jiyeon: Yah! you should tell it to her now.

Jb: but...SooHyun didn't want to know suzy that he's SooHyun.

Jiyeon: Wae?

Jb: I don't know.

Jiyeon: but you should tell it to her! 

Jb: O-ok. 

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*SooHyun's House*

 

SooHyun: Yes! Done packing up my things. Uhmma! Uhmma! (smiled) I miss you Suzy-ah! I miss you Suzy-ah! (laugh) Aigoo~ I'm crazy! :D

 

*Phone ringing*

Taecyeon...........................................calling

 

Phone Conversation

 

SooHyun: Yes? 

Taecyeon: Yah! 

SooHyun: Wae?

Taecyeon: Yah!

SooHyun: Tss. Taec! 

Taecyeon: Yah!

SooHyun: TAECYEON! I WILL PUNCH YOUR FACE!

Taecyeon: HAHAHAHAHA. 

SooHyun: Aigooo~ You're crazy!

Taecyeon: Yeah~ crazy for you!

SooHyun: Taecyeon! 

Taecyeon: HAHA. ok, ok. 

SooHyun: So, why did you call me?

Taecyeon: Is there a party at your house? 

SooHyun: Party?

Taecyeon: Neh. 

SooHyun: None!

Taecyeon: Tss. Kill joy.

SooHyun: Kill joy your face!

Taecyeon: HAHA. 

SooHyun: Yah! 

Taecyeon: Wae?

SooHyun: How's Suzy?

Taecyeon: She's fine. but her face looks pale. 

SooHyun: Pale?

Taecyeon: Neh. You know she want to say something, that she can't say.

SooHyun: What is it?

Taecyeon: I don't know. Talk to her!

SooHyun: Shido!

Taecyeon: Tss. Wae?

SooHyun: ........S-see you later! Bye~

 

End of Phone Conversation

 

Taecyeon: Wow! Unbelievable. He hang up the phone. Aigooo~

 

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*Suzy's House*

 

*Phone Vibrating*

1 unread message from Jb

 

Suzy: Jb?

 

Message (Jb)

Hi. Suzy! Are you free tomorrow? I have something to tell you. If you want to know it, just go to the park tomorrow. at 6:00 pm Ok? -Jb

 

Message (Suzy)

Ok. I'm free tomorrow! 

Message sent!

 

*Phone Vibrating*

 

Message (Jb)

Good! don't forget! :)

 

Message (Suzy)

Ok! 

Message sent!

 

Suzy: What is it? (sigh)

Hyesung: Unnie!

Suzy: Wae?

Hyesung: Look! Is this yours? (gave the note to her)

(The note)

 

Suzy: N-neh! Yah! where did you get this?

Hyesung: at the trashcan! 

Suzy: Tss. I throw it, then you get it again? 

Hyesung: Neh. Who gave this note to you?

Suzy: C-carl. 

Hyesung: Ahh. Unnie! You should keep this. 

Suzy: Why would I keep that, I want to forget him!

Hyesung: Ara! but you should keep this as a remembrance.

Suzy: Tss. Whatever! 

 

*Flashback*

 

SooHyun: Yah! give me your hand.

Suzy: Wae?

SooHyun: Just give it. 

Suzy: Ok. 

SooHyun: (put the small note to her hand)

Suzy: What is it?

SooHyun: You opened it and read it (smiling)

Suzy: (opened the note) 

SooHyun: (smiled at her)

Suzy: Tss. corny!

SooHyun: Corny? (sad tone)

Suzy: Tss. you're so cute! Just kidding. Thank you. I always appreciate your note! (smiled at him)

SooHyun: Keep it ok? 

Suzy: (nod)

SooHyun: Suzy-ah!

Suzy: Neh?

SooHyun: Can you read what is written in there? 

Suzy: (laugh) Ok. "I Love You"

SooHyun: I can't hear you! 

Suzy: Tss. I LOVE YOU! 

SooHyun: (smiled) I Love You Too. 

Suzy: (smiled) 

 

End of flashback

 

Suzy: "Keep it ok?" (sigh) I really really miss him. (she thought to herself)

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*SooHyun's House*

 

SooHyun: Yah! Taecyeon!

Taecyeon: (ignored him)

Wooyoung: HAHA. poor SooHyun! 

SooHyun: Tss. Yah! TAECYEON!

Taecyeon: Wae? can't you see I'm eating.

SooHyun: can you please stop for a while? you can continued that later.

Taecyeon: Shido!

SooHyun: Aishhhh~ 

 

*knock* *knock*

 

SooHyun: (opened the door) Oh! come in Jb and Jiyeon.

Wooyoung: Hi!!

Jb: Hi. 

Taecyeon: Hi. Jiyeon!

Jiyeon: Hello. hey! Taec! are you really that hungry huh?

(they all laugh)

SooHyun: Jb can I talk to you?

Jb: sure. 

SooHyun: let's go outside.

Jb: Ok.

SooHyun: Ah. Jiyeon-ah! Is it okay to you?

Jiyeon: N-neh! 

SooHyun: (smiled at her) 

Jb: let's go.

 

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Jb: So what is it?

SooHyun: You know. I really miss Suzy. 

Jb: Wae? did you too got fight?

SooHyun: Neh. and she really mad at me. 

Jb: Ow.

SooHyun: You know, she saw me and Jiyeon kissing. 

Jb: Ahh. 

SooHyun: Sorry!

Jb: Tss. It's okay! 

SooHyun: Jb. can you do me a favor?

Jb: Ok, what is it?

SooHyun: Yesterday. I make a letter for Suzy. and I want you to give this letter to her. (gave the letter to Jb)

Jb: Ok. 

SooHyun: Thank You!

Jb: Welcome. 

SooHyun: So, let's get inside! It's cold here! 

Jb: Haha. Ok! 

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Next Day (Sunday)

*At Kirin*

 

Jb: Suzy-ah!

Suzy: Oh! Jb! 

Jb: Can we talk?

Suzy: Yes. 

Jb: Let's go at the park.

Suzy: Ok.

 

*Park*

 

Suzy: So, what is it?

Jb: do you know Kim Soo Hyun?

Suzy: N-neh. Wae?

Jb: tell me, who is soohyun in your life?

Suzy: SooHyun, He is my friend. My special friend. 

Jb: Ok. 

Suzy: Wait. do you know him?

Jb: Neh.

Suzy: (shocked)

Jb: and I know where is he!

Suzy: Sincha?

Jb: (nod)

Suzy: Oh! Please, can you tell me where is he?

Jb: In one condition.

Suzy: What is it?

Jb: you talk to........

Suzy: Carl?

Jb: N-neh!

Suzy: Shido!

Jb: Suzy! What if I Carl is KIM SOO HYUN?

Suzy: what? I don't understand you. 

Jb: are you ready to know the truth?

Suzy: Tell me now!

Jb: O-ok. Suzy-ah! Carl Hyun is Kim Soo Hyun, your friend who lost long time ago.

Suzy: Whaat!? 

Jb: believe it or not! He's your friend! He's Kim Soo Hyun. 

Suzy: (tears started to fall) 

Jb: You know, he doesn't want you to know that he is Kim Soo Hyun.

Suzy: But Why?

Jb: I don't know.. But....... Suzy. He's leaving.

Suzy: Leaving?

Jb: Neh. He's going to America. and this day, is SooHyun's Last day. Tomorrow he's flight. 

Suzy: Why? 

Jb: because her mother wants to see him. That's why he needs to go to America to see his mother again. 

Suzy: did you say this is he's last day?

Jb: Neh! 

Suzy: SooHyun-ah!

Jb: And He told me that I gave this letter to you. (gave the letter to her)

Suzy: (stared at the letter)

Jb: Now, you should talk to him. You know, he really misses you! 

Suzy: What if.......

Jb: Suzy! SooHyun needs you! You know, he can't leave here. because of you! He wants to talk to you before he leaves! but he can't, coz you're mad at him. 

Suzy: (sniff) What did I do! What did I do!

Jb: Suzy. This is he's last day. Promise me that you will talk to him today not tomorrow! 

Suzy: Ok. 

Jb: Good. 

Suzy: I can't believe it! I can't believe it! Carl is SooHyun!

Jb: He thought that you are Mari. Jang Mari.

Suzy: Neh. I didn't tell him that my real name is Suzy Bae. The day that he leaves me, is the day that I will tell him that my real name is Suzy.

Jb: Ahh. Now I know! 

Suzy: Thank You Jb. 

Jb: You're Welcome. Go to his house now, and talk to him.

Suzy: (nod)

Jb: So, I need to go now. Jiyeon texted me.

Suzy: Ok.

Jb: Bye.

Suzy: Bye.

 

(opened the letter and read)

 

Suzy,

 

Hi. Suzy-ah! How are you? You know I really really missed you! :) I want to say Sorry, Sorry for all. I didn't mean to hurt you. I'm so stupid! Stupid right? You know the first day we've met? and until the day that we became friend. not just friend but my special friend. and The day I fall in love with you. Sorry, If I keep saying It's not the right time, but you know I really really want to court you. but I can't. I'm not afraid. but I'm afraid of being rejected. But I'm happy that you love me too. (I'm smiling) :) Suzy-ah! Suzy-ah! Don't cry? always smile. Even though you said that You don't want to see me anymore, I think you can't. I know, that this time you really really missed me now. Suzy, I can't promised that I can protect you, and I can't promised that I will be always at your side. I'm sorry. but One thing you should never forget, that you'll be always in my heart. I love you Suzy-ah. Yah! Don't forget me! Don't forget The Stupid Me! Haha. Goodbye Suzy-ah~ 

 

Love Carl, :)

 

Suzy: SooHyun-ah! (sniff) you leaving me again? I can't! This time, I will never let you go again! 

 

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*SooHyun's House*

 

SooHyun: Yah! Taec. 

Taecyeon: Wae?

SooHyun: Do me a favor!

Taecyeon: Tss. again?

SooHyun: Can you go to suzy's house?

Taecyeon: Wae?

Wooyoung: No need. Because she's here!

SooHyun: Whaaaat!?

Wooyoung: Neh. Suzy is here. 

Suzy: We need to talk, Kim Soo Hyun!

SooHyun: S-suzy!?

Taecyeon: Yah! it's your chance to talk to her. 

Wooyoung: He's leaving tomorrow Suzy.

Suzy: Ara! That's why I want to talk to him. 

SooHyun: Ok, let's go.

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*Park*

 

Suzy: (tears started to fall)

SooHyun: are you crying? I said Don't cry.

Suzy: Are you leaving?

SooHyun: Neh. It's okay if you get mad at me, I deserve it!

Suzy: (sniff) No, I'm not mad at you.  I'm sorry SooHyun-ah!

SooHyun: no need to say sorry. It's my fault. 

Suzy: SooHyun-ah!

SooHyun: I'm sorry if I leave you without saying, My father, he wants me to go to Korea. because he doesn't want me to be a chef. he wants me to be a lawyer. That's why he send me to Korea. Jang Mari, Suzy Bae. I hope you can forgive me. Can you?

Suzy: (sniff) Yes. I can forgive you. but Please, don't leave me again. 

SooHyun: I'm sorry Suzy-ah, but I need to go to America. I hope you can understand me. My mother, she wants to see me. and I want to see her too.

Suzy: I understand. 

SooHyun: Can you look at me.

Suzy: (look to SooHyun)

SooHyun: (touched her face) Still the Mari that I met. No changes, you still beautiful. Suzy-ah. I promised, I 'll be back. Can you wait me? 

Suzy: (nod)

SooHyun: You know, everyday, everynight, I still thinking of you. I can't get you off my mind. And the day that Jb tells me all, that you are Mari, you know, I can't express my happiness. The feeling that I want to hug you and kiss you. but I told to myself that It will never be happen. 

Suzy: Wae?

SooHyun: coz you're mad at me. 

Suzy: I'm not mad at you. Hyesung-ah told me that I need to forget you and erased you in my life, but you know, I can't. I can't erased you and forget you. You came into my life at the time when I needed someone, and I fell for You instantly. And no matter what I feel for you, I never un-fell for you. So many times I thought I would never find someone to love me the way I needed to be loved. Then you came into my life and showed me what true love really is!

SooHyun: I can't forget you too. Coz I really really love you. 

Suzy: Can I hug you?

SooHyun: (nod)

Suzy: (hug him)

SooHyun: (hug her tight) Suzy-ah. Can you wait for me? 

Suzy: Neh. I can wait for you. but make sure you will be back. 

SooHyun: Promise, I'll be back. 

Suzy: I'll wait for you soohyun-ah. and the day you came back, I will never let you go again!

SooHyun: (smiled)

Suzy: I love you SooHyun-ah.

SooHyun: I love you more. (moved closer to her)

Suzy: (closed her eyes)

and their lips met, a soft and sweet kiss.

SooHyun: I will be your shelter, I'll give you my shoulder, Just reach out for my love, Call my name and my heart will hear I will be there, there's nothing to fear.

Suzy: (smiled) SooHyun-ah!

SooHyun: Wae?

Suzy: Can I go with you at the airport?

SooHyun: Sure. 

Suzy: This night won't last forever. SooHyun-ah! Can I stay here? This is our last night and last day!

SooHyun: Yeah. Let's go, It's pretty cold up here. 

Suzy: Ok. (smiled at him)

SooHyun: Suzy-ah!

Suzy: Neh?

SooHyun: hold my hand.

Suzy: Tss. (hold his hand)

SooHyun: (smiled)

Suzy: (smiled)

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Monday

*At The Airport*

Taecyeon: Yah! Take care of yourself!

SooHyun: Tss.

Taecyeon: Oh! My wifey~

SooHyun: Y-yah!

Wooyoung: Take care bro!

SooHyun: Yah! Baby wooyoung, Be kind to Suzy, or else!

Wooyoung: Ara! Ara! 

SooHyun: (smiled)

Jiyeon: Bye Friend. I want to say Thank you for being a good friend to me. 

SooHyun: (smiled) Sorry If I hurt you.

Jiyeon: Tss. It's ok. let's forget it. and beside I found my ideal man, who will love til the end.

Jb: (smiling)

SooHyun: Yeah~ I'm happy for you. Yah! I found mine too!

Jb: (laughs) 

SooHyun: Thank you Jb, for all. 

Jb: Welcome bro! Have a safe flight! 

SooHyun: (nod)

Taecyeon: So, done!

Suzy: Yah! you forget me?

They all laugh

SooHyun: Of course, I will not forget you.

Wooyoung: Ehem! This is their moment. Let's wait suzy outside.

Jb: Haha. 

Jiyeon: Yea~ you're right! This istheir moment.

Taecyeon: Wiw~ Suzy-ah! We will wait you outside. 

Suzy: (nod)

Wooyoung: Let's go.

SooHyun: So?

Suzy: Don't forget me!

SooHyun: (nod)

Suzy: You can email me, text me, call me, and chat me.

SooHyun: Tss. 

Suzy: Wae?

SooHyun: I will miss you Suzy-ah! I will miss your voice and your pretty face.

Suzy: (smiled) I will miss you more! 

SooHyun: Aigoo~ Take care of yourself. Don't worry I told taec. to take care of you.

Suzy: Tss. Taec! He's lie wooyoung!

SooHyun: No. Taec is different to Wooyoung. 

Suzy: Haha. coz wooyoung is a little bit childish?

SooHyun: (laughs) 

Suzy: I will miss your smile and your laugh. 

SooHyun: I don't want to leave you, but I need. I want to spend my lifetime loving you. I love you Suzy-ah. 

Suzy: (tears started to fall)

SooHyun: Don't cry! Stop your tears. 

Suzy: I can't.

SooHyun: (wiped her tears and cupped her face) Look at me.

Suzy: (look at him)

SooHyun: Two people love each other, they fight through everything together. Every doubt, every challenge, every pain. Wait for me Suzy-ah. You are the only one for me, for as long as I live. and if you love me, wait for me. 

Suzy: I'll wait for you, SooHyun-ah! 

SooHyun: I'll be coming back for you Suzy-ah. I will return here, and start a new life with you. (hug her)

Suzy: (hug him back)

SooHyun: (cupped her face again) This is my last kiss for you. 

Suzy: (closed her eys)

 

Their lips meet again; a soft and sweet kiss. 

 

SooHyun: Goodbye, Suzy-ah!

Suzy: Bye.

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Chapter 16 done! :) Ok, for real. The next chapter, is a final chapter. Thank you for supporting my story til the end. Love you readers! :***** ~tinegc xxx

 

Photos:

 

The Kiss. :">

 

SooHyun: "Wait for me"

 

The hug. :)

 

Taecyeon and SooHyun. 

 

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carlos_renton #1
Keep going ;) You are a good writer and i'm looking for your next fanfic :)
Hyunzy fighting :P
yonaaa #2
Chapter 8: Aaaaaaaa so sweeeeet.. Love them so much!
Soohyunoppa
#3
Good job! Author :))) Hyunzy fighting!
SooHyunSuji
#4
Chapter 17: Yieeee. I love the ending! :'> Nice story keep it up! More Hyunzy stories pleaseee X)
Optimistic_
#5
Hi. Readers! :) Please support me til the end. Thank you. This is my first story. and I want you to know that I will make another hyunzy story, :) One shot? Maybe. xxx ~tinegc
lovehyunzy #6
Chapter 7: Awwww. They are so cute. Update soon pls
lovehyunzy #7
Chapter 7: Awwww. They are so cute. Update soon pls
lovehyunzy #8
PLS. Update soon<3
Jiyeonn
#9
I agree with skullmaki... can you please just use their real names? Plus its strange with Jiyeon's as Jiyeonhyung... hyung is the older male figure for a guy so thats awkward