Chapter 07

Tracking Point

 

     “Mr. Choi?” A firm voice called out muffled behind a closed door. Two knocks followed. “Mr. Choi! A letter has arrived.”

Mr. Choi ran his palm through his well-cut black hair, creating a short lasting wave. “Yes. Come in.” He replied tautly, not looking up from the documents he was reviewing.

A lanky young man stepped in with swift steps and put an envelope quietly on his desk. Mr. Choi looked up and beheld the envelope quietly before he reached out for it and opened with a silver paper knife.

“A report from Private Eye Tae, this early?” He remarked as he pulled out the report.

“We know exactly which specialists to hire for operations like these!” The lanky man commented and positioned himself in front of the door like a security guard.

“That’s why you’re working for me…” He replied and scanned the report he held in his hand.

“So…” He began after his eyes reached the last word of the page. “Our sweet Tiffany has been localized, in Tokyo. She’s working as a simple ticket conductor! How rebellious, making a living on her own, independently.” He chuckled shortly, but went on in his usual coldness. “She is rather unsecure, adapts her way of speaking, which is in Japanese, which also suggest that she sympathizes with her, unconsciously. This is perfect! Perfect! I’ve never had an agent who analyzed the person she was spying on with such efficiency. She is even entering Tiffany’s state of mind. See here, Dae.” He showed him the report and pointed at a certain paragraph.

… she read the news about the retirement, reacted emotionally... she could have sensed a possible threat (also increases her vulnerability), hence further amendments regarding her stay are to be expected, e.g. possible cancellation.. furthermore I can easily gain her trust this way by showing compassion and helping her out with preparations..     ”

Awesome. See, she isn’t only recording her actions, she is entering her  state  of  mind!” He emphasized, his hands gesturing to rub his temple.

“How often did even she meet her so far?”

“Two times.”

“Two times only? Incredible. I’m sure we get our operation done much quicker than scheduled this way.” His armchair squeaked faintly as he stood up and turned around to behold Seoul’s bustling streets out of his wide windows.

“Dae, see, I’m tired of looking down on Seoul’s streets day by day. We should really pay Japan a quick visit, shouldn’t we?. I want to guide my little sweetheart back to Seoul myself. I already came to miss her beautiful smile.” His words resounded menacingly through his office.

“Sir, any required prearrangements will be carried out immediately.” Dae put out and straightened his back as if to salute.

“Good. You can go now.” Mr. Choi said without turning around.

Dae shot a quick glimpse at Mr. Choi’s well-build figure standing before Seoul’s massive skyline and pictured how his father used to stand there, greeting him with a casual smile, doing his work faithfully, inspired by the words of the Holy Lord.  He sighed and shut the door. Instantly he pulled out his phone to begin with the preparations for the stay in Japan.

 

 

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Swaggy_yeon15
#1
where are you now that I need ya~~~~ xD
AllenChi #2
Chapter 11: this story was abandoned??..
Va_asianloverz
#3
Chapter 11: please update soon
Va_asianloverz
#4
Chapter 11: please update soon
Lock49Loyal
#5
wow omg
this is really good!!
I don't exactly remember how I found this fic, but how come I found this just now??!
too good to be left abandoned
I hope you're making a comeback author :P
AlmightyByuntae
#6
Chapter 11: Finally I had time to read this update and omfg this is getting damn intense. Yuri comes off really bad and I have to say I like that :D
Ironic how Taeyeon tried to stay distant and uncommited for the mission's sake but fell badly for Tiffany's charms and now wants to rescue her. I have a feeling that Yuri is going to play a big role, can't wait to see how this is going to develop. Hopefully Yuri's plan will succeed. And hopefully, no one is going to die except that bastard Mr. Choi. DON'T YOU DARE TO KILL ONE OF THE GIRLS :D
Anyways, nice update! You know how much I like your writing style and stuff as I am your biggest fan (and seemingly the only one which is sad because you definitely deserve more recognition for your fics because they're awesome, you should get an award for this, okay this is getting too long). I just love you for writing a great TaeNy fic without the stereotypical shizz that's apparent in other TaeNy fics (you know what I mean, I'm always ranting about this in our convos :D).
Keep up the good work and you'll get the recognition you deserve, that's what I wish for you my dear friend <3
PS: Sorreh for the long comment hehe, I just have lots of things to say after your updates :D
AlmightyByuntae
#7
Chapter 10: Wooooow, that was one hell of a chapter :O It gave me all kinds of feels, ide...I expected this chapter to be quite relaxing, you know, two girls just sittin in a bar, drinking something and having a nice night and then BAM this mofo Mr. Choi is appearing and the action is starting and they get abducted and oh my gaaawd these bastards just ed everything over D:
AND THEN YURI IS MAKING HER FIRST APPEARANCE AND I TOTALLY KNOW WHAT YOU HAVE IN MIND D: you're cruel buddy but you know I like it cruel. But not too cruel, just a bit. Okay? Ahhh sorry I'm going cray. See what your fic is doing to me?!
Anyways, great chapter! I seriously can't wait for more. You really have a way to slay my expectations every time you update :D
Keep up the good work buddy :)