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A Love Story? Is It Really Like One Though?

Donghae POV

Should I go out with him? No I love Eunhyuk, but he left. Wait, why should I care about Eunhyuk in  a situation like this? Yeah I should maybe to just get my mind off of Eunhyuk. But isn't that mean to just use Siwon as an excuse? But I should give him a chance Siwon's a good guy. 

 -later in 6th period (advisory)

"Donghae go to reset." said Mr.Lee as he wrote something down on his clipboard

I walked to the counter and sat down  with my back against the wall. I closed my eyes trying to see if I could fall asleep.

"Donghae." I heard someone say as they shook my shoulder.As I lazily opened my eyes  I saw that the lights were off and everyone else was watching some video.

"Donghae." 

"What?" I asked as I turned my head a bit annoyed. but it was Siwon

"Oh hey." I said 

"Did you come up with an anwser?" he asked

"Yeah I did." I said as I started yawning and stretching

"What is it?" he asked

"Yes."

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I know it's short but at least its an update and Im sorry for being late and all the grammar mistakes
 

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Hyukhae_is_real #1
Chapter 13: Kyaaaaaaaa, Hyukkie oppaaaa and his baby girl Hae are so cuteeeee ^____^
They're so stupid, they love each other but none of 'hem has confessed yet *pout*
Pleeeeeeaaseeeee, author nim update, i want to know how they'll end up together ^^
Forest_pixi
#2
Chapter 13: ok then...I really think you need to organize your thoughts better when writing. I got confused sometimes in terms of he timeline, scene changes, etc. The plot was basic, so I saw what you were going for. So far anyway.

I think you mentioned too many, unimportant characters that sort of made the story feel really random.

Taking into consideration that you were writing based on a real life experience, it would have been better to stick to the KEY people in the story instead of trying to mention everyone.

Work on showing the relationship between the characters to make it feel less like "name-dropping" and more like a narrative.

Anyway! Keep up the good work! Happy Writing!!
voiladeux
#3
Chapter 14: W-what ? Why ? Dont be like this :(
exo_baozi #4
Chapter 14: Stop it! You dont have to do this!!!
exo_baozi #5
Chapter 13: lol you are such a dork :p
aidenparadise #6
Kangteuk is so sweet..
Wonder when eunhae will be together for real
aidenparadise #7
Chapter 12: Are they ok now?
CallMehhBubz #8
Chapter 11: I just realized that you said that Heechul was eating Takis... I'm eating Takis right now... o.0
CallMehhBubz #9
Chapter 9: Hahaha!! A" ____-I'm-basically-your-mom" look
aidenparadise #10
Chapter 8: Hyuk please be jealous...