~ Parkour Love ~

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Bang Minsoo

 

Ahn Daniel

 

I slow down and take a deep breath. The sun is setting already. I sit on the edge of the rooftop. My heart is beating fast, my breathing is fast and little drops of sweat are on my forehead. I look around, the view from up here is breathtaking. I see people walking, shopping, eating, laughing and I see couples holding hands. The memories come creeping in my mind and I hold my breath for a while. Is he happy? ... Did he found someone else? ... Does he miss me like I miss him? ... Did he forget me? ... 

 

 

 

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LuciDreamer #1
Chapter 3: A very cute ending!
LuciDreamer #2
Chapter 2: Woah, you really did listen to me. Now I kind of feel a bit guilty, but not really. Now I get to enjoy MORE of this story!

*fistpump
*highfive own self
*subscribe
mward46 #3
Chapter 2: love this! hope you update soon!
LuciDreamer #4
Chapter 1: Reading the first paragraphs were such a joy, how you described the feeling of parkour left me breathless and made my heart rate speed up. Minsoo's POV as he brooded in the rooftops excited me and lured me in to his back story. I do have to say however that this could have done better if it was written longer, there was this writing transition that happened when Minsoo's flight returned to Korea, Minsoo's POV lost his maturity and the events leading up to the ending were somewhat much too rushed. Also, I see no relevance in introducing a stepsister in to the family dynamic that you have already weaved.

Despite all that, the fic was still good and I commend you for introducing parkour in to AFF.
kpopfwenzy #5
Chapter 1: this is a beauty...it's really nice..
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