Characters

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Now, let's talk about characters

Writers are people who are perfectionists. They want their grammar to be correct, they want their plot to flow smoothly, and they want scenes which makes their readers laugh or cry. 

Like all things, there are limitations.

Sure, perfect your grammar that the most brutal grammar Nazi will bow down to you. Perfect your plot that your readers will praise you nonstop.

But, never make perfect characters.

Us writers are perfectionists, and unconsciously, we make our characters perfect without meaning to. It's normal for us writers to make common mistakes like these, but we have to learn from them. Take a look at this character profile:

Kim Hye Rin
Kim Hyerin is someone you'd want to be. She's tall and has flawless, pale skin. She's mostly described as 'cute'. I suggest don't mess with her, because she can kick your , even though she has a small and petite body. She can speak almost all the languages known to man, so she's useful when it comes to foreign objects or people. Did I mention that she's super intelligent? She's top one of her school. She's shy, and she only has 3 best friends, 5 close friends, and 10 friends. She has the cutest pout ever. She's also very respectful, kind, considerate, generous, and all the positive qualities you know. 


Oh, but she's an orphan. 


Why, isn't Hyerin a beauty?

Do you really want to read about someone perfect? Not only do you not relate to her, but also you end up disliking her. Perfect characters are really easy to make, and easy to portray.

Just make everything go right for her.

Here are some pointers to develop your character better. 

• Give her imperfections. Yes, imperfections. I'm not saying to give her all the bad qualities that instead of relating to the main character, you feel sorry for her. And no, clumsy and forgetful are not the only bad qualities in the world. Arrogant, greedy, competitive, crazy, indecisive, mean, etc.

• Give her problems she can't face alone. Even the bright witch Hermione Granger needed Harry and Ron on her side. Even the victor, Katniss Everdeen needed Peeta, Gale and her family to succeed in the Hunger Games. Even the child of Athena, Annabeth Chase needed Percy Jackson and Grover by her side to complete the quests. Give your character problems that she couldn't face alone. And no, problems like she can't complete her math homework are not the other problems in the world. 

• Try to base your character off a friend. It's easier if it's someone you're close to, so you'll know his/her imperfections well. 

So, to conclude this tip today, make your character believable by giving her imperfections. Trust me, us readers are tired of reading characters like 'Kim Hyerin'. 

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Coccchanel
#1
Chapter 5: Hellu~ I was wondering, would you consider romance a genre on it's own? Or would the story need another genre to carry through, to make it interesting? And, would you consider drama a genre as well? Or does it count as light angst?
Awesome shop, by the way~!! I hope you update soon~!! \(^o^)/
deluforselu #2
Characters? Thank you! I loved this
exoplanetlayouts #3
Helpful, never seen a story like this before ^^
nadeshiko16
#4
Chapter 1: Hello! I am veryyyy like veryyy thankful for your tips, they had helped me soo much! I'm wondering if its okay to take the title you made on chap. 1 ? :D Pleaaase? :D Thank you very much :D
mother-chucker
#5
Chapter 5: Please update~!
heeyoungie
#6
Chapter 2: otl my eyes and mind xD /dizzy/
I want to ask, if I make a story with character profile, but just like:

Lee Sunny:
16 years old
Sulli's sister

without her/his character is it still a minus?
hideandseeker
#7
Chapter 5: You're so funny! Hmmm, something I still need help with is writing a one shot. It's tricky business, you know! Since you don't know how long to go on for, but too short isn't a good thing either.
snsdfan9 #8
Thank you for making this :D
michyeossuh
#9
Chapter 4: Wow. I'm learning a lot from you. I kind of understand what you feel about the common plots. Hehe.
hideandseeker
#10
Chapter 4: I always love it when you update because then I can compare myself and see, did I do this? And if I did, I'd have to add something or edit something to change my mistakes. Thanks!