"Breaking Point"

Description

 

       Tao forced himself to walk, legs wobbling weakly. He pulled off his tie, throwing the black knot onto the floor. He grasped the refrigerator door, using all his strength to do such an easy task, open it. He gulped down a bottle of water, crunching the now empty plastic.
           A ribboned box sat on the middle shelf, it's contents hidden through the white cardboard. Tao bit his lip, taking the box with shaky hands. He untied the silk bow, it's material flowing to his feet.
        "Don't Cry Oppa." The cake read, and Tao mourned. 

 

 

A short story about a brother who would do the unevitable for the sister he loved so much.

Foreword

Starts off a little slow for background/support, then progresses. There (will be) are 3 chapters.

Based on the 2012 movie "Don't cry, mommy" starring U-Kiss's Dongho. (Movie was really good, recommending!)

 

Enjoy (:

 

Idk why chapter 2 is rated, there's no cuss words or anything (?)

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ilabya10 #1
interesting~
bongkler
#2
Chapter 2: HOLY SHIZZ. I NEVER IMAGINED THEM THIS EVIL BUT THIS IS REAL GOOD.