Equally Unbalanced

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It's short...really short.

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pierce #1
Chapter 1: Okay so after reading it a second time is she cheating on the guy with another guy? Like maybe does she already have a boyfriend and this is someone she is seeing on the side that makes her feel special?
pierce #2
Chapter 1: This was so deep that I can't even explain how much I liked it. Was this one of those random moments of inspiration that you got from daydreaming or maybe even listening to a song? Because I tend to write complex and abstract things like this at the most random times. To me, I thought this piece was beautiful. I'm going to read it a second time so that I can analyze it and ask you a bunch of questions about it ^_^