Sixteen Summers Ago

Description

 

Luhan is 16 years old. He has a space in his heart, left by the departure of a parent. A space that can only be filled by the presence of another parent.

Kris is an idol, with 16 years of experience under his belt. He has no space in his heart, even though he loves no one.

When he finds Luhan in his apartment, he doesn't know what to think.

As far as Kris knows, Luhan isn't even supposed to exist.

Why?

Because Luhan says he's Kris' son.

 

 

Foreword

Starring: Kris, Luhan, EXO-M and (briefly) Yoona.

Genre: Family

Length: 9 chapters; 14 595 words

Trailer (surprise made by the wonderful apocryphal):

 

This is a contest entry for Let's Write to This Modest Proposal [A Writing Challenge-Contest]

If you want more details, click on the link (I highly recommend it! You should join the next round if you're up for it ;D). 

The outline of the story was written by my co-author and partner in this round of the contest, Raelin (Thank you!).

Here's the link to the outline.

In regards to Luhan being 'out of this world', I interpreted it as if Luhan isn't supposed to exist. 

I'd appreciate it if my writing was not stolen, rephrased, lifted, reproduced or reuploaded onto any site. 

Thanks!~ I hope you enjoy ^^

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ShinAhHyo #1
Chapter 9: reread this again, and cry again ;;((
beautiful story
suffocatedsoul #2
Chapter 9: It's really good I sort of cried ...
yoong23 #3
Chapter 9: This story is the best.. I cried a lot while reading each chapter..i love the last chapter the most and the epilogue which kris always reminded by yoona's letter on how to took care of luhan.. <3
zyla17ann #4
Chapter 9: This reminds me so much of an old Bollywood movie..forgot what it's called.
Anyhoo! I cried, cried n cried at almost every bit of sad phrase in this beautifully written story.
And the epilogue was perfect.
taurusgirl #5
Chapter 9: This is so good so epic , ah words can't describe how i felt after i read this story :')
Good job author-nim ♥♥♥♥♥♥
azure_bliss #6
Chapter 9: I cried, I really did!
Yoona's letter, Luhan's confession. Everything was just...Mind-blowing. Really.
Does this mean that Luhan has uncles too? Fairly sure that Uncle Umin is his favorite xD
clasicoustic- #7
Chapter 9: T_T this story is just... EPIC!!!!
you success made me cry.
amazing story!! ^^
ararearaya #8
Chapter 9: ;;A;;
this is so heart wrenching (though for me not as heartbreaking as Tangerine Express). I read Tangerine Express and that's a very, very great and angsty and nicely written fanfic, so I decided to read your other stories and interested by 'family' tag in this fic. So, yeah this is nicely written too ;A;
I remember about Yoona while read this. Remember she, as rumor has said, too, is abandoned by her mother.

"When I was younger, I tried to pretend that
it didn't hurt; you know, not having a father,"
Luhan says, and the words seem to stab Kris
through the heart. "For Mom's sake. I figured
I would never love you as much as Mom did,
and I didn't want to hurt her by saying that I
wanted you to be there. But that's all I ever
wanted, for you to be there. Just once."

I cried when i read that. And Yoona's letter.

'Remember that he's still a child, and no child deserves to be left alone.'

no child deserves to be left alone.

Yoonaaaaa ;;;---;;;

ahem. sorry i'm spazzing. well, this fic sure is amazing. <3 You have amazing writing skill, sarozu. write more and update Tangerine Express, please? :)
hwaiting! *A*)9
dinhae #9
Chapter 9: After reading 'letters to yoona' and 'she likes rain' i decided to read this,and i cried again,now i feel like i'm a cry baby
Luhan is so cute here!and kris...so father-like!
Cnt really put my thoughts into words!
I LOVE YOUR FANFICS
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