What's So Fun About Halloween?

Description

It's Halloween! And you know what that means... Scary spooks, spider webs, plump pumpkins, and a time for people to get free candy! What could be more fun?

Anything.

Halloween is nothing but a time where people finally have an excuse to showcase their inner cosplay freak and get diabetes in a wrapper from strangers. Yeah. Fun.

Foreword

Hello~ ^^ I'm writing this for the It's the Holiday Season: A Writing Contest so I hope you'll enjoy it! It'll be my first time entering a writing contest so I hope I do well ><

Feel free to enter yourself, all you have to do is write about a holiday. It's that simple. The deadline is on the 21st of January, so I wish those who are entering/entered the best of luck! ^^

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NadoSarang #1
Chapter 5: sooo cute!!! asdfghjkl~ feels!
bangdaehard #2
Chapter 3: Cute. So cute. :'3

But may I suggest something? Try to end the story with a more climatic, hanging ending. It leaves the leader anticipating for the next.

Other than that, very well-written! You went from one topic to another and it flowed well. It gave the story a sense of realism (because in real life people tend to get off-topic in most convos). Good job! :)
bangdaehard #3
Chapter 2: Nice building to what I expect to be an unexpected twist of event. I still haven't gotten to the 'OMG WHAT IS HAPPENING' part yet though (not sure if the last line foretells that but I was just imagining Suho in a ridiculous Halloween costume). Anyway, I look forward to reading what comes next! :)
Tinywings #4
Chapter 1: It's a good opening :) It's not that thrilling yet (I don't know if it's supposed to bethrilling and all) but it's pleasant to read, good flow :D So yeah, you're doing good! I assume it's going to revolve around Kris? You amde his character skeptic of halloween, so i assume you will work further on that :) for now i don't know what the plot will be, hope oyu will show that soon, but in sum, good thus far!

Good luck with it!
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