One More Step (To Your World)

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Character:

Yun:  The person whom you are inlove with since the first day you saw him.

           The main vocalist/guitarist of the band Lunafly.

           20 years old.

 

Teo:   Yun's bestfriend and co- member.

           Bubbly, kind and sweet.

 

Sam:   The leader of the band also a vocalist.

            Half British half Korean.

            Charismatic but the truth is very wacky inside.

            Playful but is serious when it comes to music.

 

(You) Seo Chun Hei:  A daughter of one of Seoul's Richest Businessman.

                                     But despite of it, she remained simple and down-to-earth.

                                     Not a spoiled-brat like others.

                                     Fallen in-love with a man she saw performing on the street.

 

 

Foreword

I wish you could look at me....

I wish you could smile at me...

I wish you could love me...

The way you love her...

 

 

 

~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~UPDATE SOON~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~

msclair501
I will update chapter 64 tomorrow. Since I'm not confident with this chapter..lol

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KpopLoverRachel #1
Chapter 67: sad that i only discover this story now! but omfg its so goddamn good i love it so ing much. thank you so much for sharing, author-nim! SARANGHAE HAHAHA
Kpopmusic_lover
#2
Chapter 66: Just reread it all over again and I'm still in love with it. ㅋㅋㅋㅋㅋㅋㅋ
Kpopmusic_lover
#3
Love love your story it's always a fanfic I have to read!
philophobic
#4
Chapter 66: -cont-

the outing, that's where everything went interesting. HAHAHAHAHA. everything is going according to my plan.. LOL.. (i told you i like angst :P)

And when they finally broke up and everything and when yun sang Super Hero at the bar.. I must admit it, i cried. I love that song. It's fitting.. really fitting on the situation. It's not too late for Yun to win her back, but the woman is in too much pain. I wouldn't accept Yun if I were on Chunhei's shoes.

I kinda know that she'll end up being knocked up cause you didn't say that they've used protection and i was right. hahaha.. but i was sad that the baby didn't live. :(( it would be a big slap on Yun's part if he saw that she bore the kid all by herself and made him more guilty than he already is. hahahaha.. at the five years after i was looking for the baby and when Baek and ChunHei didn't talked about it i was sad.. :((

And the they went back and I swear I didn't see that CHunHei was planning revenge. Nice. But of course, you play with fire you'll end up getting burned. tsk tsk.

My heart ached for Yun when ChunHei rejected her proposal. heol.. really. i just want to cuddle him and say, don't worry Noona is here.. hahahahaha..

I'm proud of Baek here, he let go. Good job!

Ans then they are back together!!! AFTER SO MANY THINGS THAT HAPPENED IN THEIR LIFE AND MISERY THEY WENT THROUGH THEY DESERVED IT!!!!

This one is really good author-ssi. two thumbs up with this. It's not draggy even if it's long, you've managed to make it interesting until the end. It's not confusing, which I'm thankful for. And i love the parts, it's not steamy ty, quite a perfect blend for a romantic novel. And i won't say that you've ruined yun's innocent image on me, cause I've actually ruined it myself. hahaha.

Kindly tell me if you're doing another Yun biased fic. I would love to read it.

And with that said, i bid my farewell to your lovely fanfic..

Philo out~
philophobic
#5
Chapter 66: I seldom comment on fanfics, like really. but get ready for a long one author-ssi.. XDD

That took me quite a long time to read this in just one day.. hahaha.. like seriously, I am up until 5AM and wouldn't stop until my dad turned off the wifi. hahaha..

Anyway, I really have no plans reading a Lunafly fanfic but last night i thought i should try. And when i saw your fic and saw exo was there i was kinda reluctant since idrk the exo boys. and i saw how many there are i was like "maaaaaannnnn, please don't be a draggy fic"

AND IT WAS NOT!!!! I am so happy I've read your fic. Like seriously. First, this the first Yun X OC fic that I've read, and since I am such a pedo, Yun is my fave member in Lunafly hahaha.

First on how they met, gurrrll you've hit that spot right there. I love it that Yun is kinda snub at her. I like those feisty guys, though I think Yun is not like that in real life cause he really likes smiling to the crowd, somehow my imagination just likes it that he's a snub.

When Teo suddenly shows interest on Chun Hei, i was mad jealous. She's such a lucky girl. Teo and Yun. Da*n. hahaha

When Yun started to show interest on her, HAHAHAHAHAHAHA, i giggled like a teenage fool. HE'S SO MANLY I CANNOT.

I like how you added Minjee on the character list, to balance all the nauseating sweetness of those two. XD

Yun is such a dbag for 2timing ChunHei really. A BIG DBAG. I hated him for a while, BUT, that made me love you author-nim. If there is one thing that makes me drawn on a fic that is the angst on the plot.

I so love the angst, i can feel the pain that ChunHei was feeling. When i was at the part when i knew that she knew already my reaction is "OHGAHD SHE KNEW!? AND SHE AGREED TO MAKE LOVE EVEN IF SHE KNEW?! YOU ARE SUCH A MASOCHIST!!!!" which i love.. hahaha..

When she was ignoring Yun and asking him look at him, ohgahd the feels.. i like those kind of situations, cause it seems like it's real life. and then she agreed to make love again. aigoo..
nikninafrawesome97
#6
Chapter 47: wtf minjee seriously what kind of cousin are you. Ohh bloody hell this is just so muchh
novitarizki #7
finally I finished this story
ugh too much emotion but i love it lol this fic seriously needs more love :(
and please write another lunafly fic please please <3333333333
CkpopL #8
Chapter 66: Finally!! finally!! they're together.
waaaah... these couple have gone through a lot

the ending is really nice
you did a great job author-nim!
sssojupop09
#9
Chapter 66: Awww... finally their together <3
Great job author-nim!!~
nightynight #10
Chapter 60: The story gets more insteresting! Kkkk
I don't mind if Chunhei still loves Yun
well, who can resist him..... :D