"I" Hate "i"

Your Writing

1. Whoever told you I can be lowercased was wrong. I can never be lowercased. Ever. If I see this again, I will shoot you. Seriously. 


Though for real guys. Look at this paragraph:

"He pushed me and i fell onto the ground, where a rock cut deeply into my cheek. i'd been sent to the nurse's office and he was sent to the principal's office. i also remember how embarrassed i felt, having his parents come over with an 'i'm sorry' cake for me and having Seunghyun apologize to me. When our parents were busy talking, he pulled me out in the hallway and made me a deal."

-Popular Girls Finish First, QueenYG_

Now look at it.

"He pushed me and I fell onto the ground, where a rock cut deeply into my cheek. I'd been sent to the nurse's office and he was sent to the principal's office. I also remember how embarrassed I felt, having his parents come over with an 'I'm sorry' cake for me and having Seunghyun apologize to me. When our parents were busy talking, he pulled me out in the hallway and made me a deal."

-Popular Girls Finish First, QueenYG_

Adding capital I's makes your story look better and less like a piece of crap. Like you actually took the 0.2 seconds it takes to press the Shift button before you pressed the I button. It does make the difference people.

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rosytae
Your rude comments aren't needed. If you got something mean to say, off. Seriously.

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whitepaper #1
Chapter 6: OhMyG... Hahahahahah this is really hilarious... Just by looking at the title, I was laughing to no end and don't make me start with the content...
Personally, I LOVE Chapter 2! Omg! I can totally understand how you feel! I just freak out everytime I see those errors in fics... Sometimes I would just stop reading them because I pisses me off... Hahahahaha!
For Chapter 4 on "He said, She said, We said", even though I don't always write "said said said", but that list gives writers more variety! I would thank you for that! :)
Sushimidumpling #2
Chapter 6: This is hilarious!!
gdragpop #3
Chapter 3: You got me in 'Well you, thanks for ruining my experience' Hahaha. You crack me up.XD
justnormalme #4
Chapter 4: I have to use this list! I hate having to use 'said' all the damn time.
howcome #5
You're very funny!
lorime
#6
Chapter 6: I'm laughing so hard right now. I almost wrote with lots of misspelled words just to get on your nerves, but I couldn't do it. I would like to put it out there that "English is my first language" and I am willing to help anyone who wants it. I love reading the stories on here and I can usually figure out what someone means by the context it's in, but it does get frustrating. I hope others take your lessons as it is meant: to help. Thanks for taking the time to do this.
enlightened_
#7
Chapter 4: yes for the list. amen.
pinkpandaa
#8
Chapter 6: Oh God, you are so damn awesome! XD

"Touch it. Make it feel good. Make love to it."
eusiah
#9
Chapter 6: "...touch her. She likes it."
lol xD