Eleven Days

Description

Taemin was a detective assigned to investigate the murder of a high school student. Everything was standard procedure (visit the crime scene; complete a history of the victim; interview likely suspects) until a bulletin was released to his unit. The next killing will happen within 11 days.

And to add further pressure, Taemin begins to have recurrent vivid dreams of a girl with red eyes, and the sense that she will be the next victim. Will he be able to find the killer and save her in time?

 

This is a whodunit story set in a world where a few have super-human powers. Telekinesis, the power to move objects. Telepathy, the power to speak directly into someone's mind. Precognition, the power to see future events. But even with these powers, nothing is ever easy.

 

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Foreword

This is my entry to the writing contest:   The perfect surprise

The deadline is 10 July 2013. That is when this story will be complete! (nope, that is a big lie because stuff is happening right now that is preventing me from writing and updating.)

 

 


Review: by Bittersweet Euphoria

 

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popgirl345543
#1
Went back to take a look at Eris and couldn't resist clicking on this link since I loved the use of powers and the genre of mystery XD don't often read that so I am intrigued :)
RobinHood108
#2
Chapter 3: Hmm.. interesting! one thing i like about these few chapters is that you took the time to explain the characteristics. i understand how these powers connects together now. also, you used descriptive words or phrases. i enjoyed reading the chapters because of that, it makes it a whole lot interesting. Hope you can update soon! i' ll be waiting very patiently. ^^
RobinHood108
#3
Hey! new subbie here. :) your plot just got me off guard, i like it. i think i've seen a movie like this before, and i'd like to read one too! so yep. i'm done with the rant of how good your plot is. lol. ;) i hope you won't mind me posting long comments all the time..
trixyBee
#4
Chapter 3: These two connected worlds.

omg

I haven't left anything here.

But it's okay, okay. Just really gradual.
AhnYeong
#5
Good Luck with the competition :")
AhnYeong
#6
Good Luck with the competition :")
White_Daisy
#7
I have to wait till April 2013 before I get to read this story? Nooooooo (T_T)
I wish you luck in the contest! I'm sure you will be able to win something! Just the foreword alone has already roused my interest (and oh, Taemin's finger pose too :P)! If you ever get this done, I will be super envy because I always wanted to write a mystery as well...but my brain ain't that advanced to think up of plots and stuffs. LOL
NeriaSurana #8
Oh sounds interesting!! Will look forward to it and good luck with the comp^^