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Your voice breaks off


Your tears that slowly build up and fall over
 

I hold you with my chest
 

and stay there for a long time
 

then slowly push you away

 

My empty eyes


My two lips that are at a loss for words
 

My heart stops at your sigh

 

 

Foreword

You gave me what i deserved

 

as you were only a game

 

a game played out of pride

 

although you may hate me

 

you'll always be in my heart

 

even if you push me away

 

Countless times....

 

- Kim myungsoo

 

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Writing contest for: http://www.asianfanfics.com/story/view/326826/exoticgrounds-one-shot-writing-contest-contest-shinee-writingcontest-exo-bap-exoticgrounds

Prompt: 60 seconds is all i need for this story - Kim Sunggyu Infinite

Like yesterday, smile at me - Janus Boyfriend

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strawbumbeez
#1
It a beautiful writing, i love it:)
falliblefantasy
#2
Chapter 1: Wow impactful oneshot :)
UbiquitousFriend
#3
Chapter 3: Review one: I guess I really deserved all this, everything I did to make her suffer.

Made? Nah.. It was fine with make.. Or it could've been - everything I did THAT made her suffer.
shawol-elf-elf #4
daebak!!! ^^
--YatLuvG
#5
Inspirational
#6
nice story and I like your poster ^^
taesthete
#7
Chapter 1: nice but i kinda wanna know what happen in the beginning now
Minkee
#8
Ooh~ This oneshot was really good.
The ending was unexpected from the usual 'lovey-dovey-let's-stay-together-forever' oneshots.
I loved it! Different and also what many people should say when this happens in real life.
Good job! I really enjoyed it.
ChaeWon1stShipper
#9
Chapter 1: wow... I... don't know what to say actually, but... this story somehow gave me an impact. haha /shot