Review
60 seconds
by b2stftw
Title : 5/5
60 seconds. Since I was listening to 60 seconds while reading, I think it fits the Ike quite well. I think the song and story are a perfect match too. Nice job
Foreword/Description : 9/10
Just little corrections, Grammar corrections. I like the Foreword and description, it makes me excited to read it. Well done
Appearance : 5/5
By looking at the graphics done by the shops you used is amazing. It fits the story, it fits the mood, and I can't explain how much more amazing it is. Nice job
Plot : 15/15
Now the plot, it's about a heartbreak and being used for a bet. The way it's explained is amazing. I don't know how to Tell you how much of a good job you did. Well done
Originality : 15/15
The way you set it up is unique. I don't see it like any other fanfic. Total originality. And the way you write is not like I've seen before. Amazing job
Grammar : 19/20
Little mistakes, just mainly grammar. I'm super strict when it comes to this. But since its only a little I'll let you off the hook. Spelling is incredible and just wow. I love it. Keep up the great work!
Characterization : 10/10
While reading, without character explanation, I feel it was too easy to tell Myungsoo. He's a nice boy, but had used a girl for a dare. But when I was trying to figure Haeun I just couldn't. She gives off a mysterious type of feeling. Which makes me more curious. Again, another well done
Flow : 10/10
The most important part. It's a oneshot so it must be at a slow pace. But you're oneshot is the best I've seen. The flow its not fast, it's not slow, and its steady. I like it. Well done
Overall Enjoyment : 10/10
My overall enjoyment? I didn't like it... I loved it! The ending wanted me to flip tables, I wanted a sequel to see what happens next.! Amazing job.
Total : 98/100
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