What a great morning!

The future Wife of Choi Minho

Aish!!! Why doesn't this stupid phone EVER work!!!

 

I sat by the bus stop waiting for my best friend in the whole world to show up. Jung Minhee,  or as I like to call her.. Min. I feel a vibration in my pocket...could it be Minnie??? I scramble for my phone, trying not to press any wrong buttons on the already damaged touch-screen, and successfully press Answer.

"Hello? Minhee?" I ask, not sure.

It's not my fault that  my phone won't recognize numbers from my contact list and every phone call comes up Private.

"No, it's Minho from Shinee. I want to marry you."  Gotta love the sarcasm. "Who else would be calling you at 2:00 in the morning you stupid pabo!" 

"Don't yell at me Minnie... you're the one who's half an hour late! I'm waiting here in the cold, waiting for the stupid coach bus that is supposed to take us on our vacation, with my stupid phone that's going to break any second now, waiting for YOU so we can get some freaking Starbucks!!!"  I even suprised myself with my yelling. 

Honestly, If anyone was around they'd think I was crazy!

...Which I'm not, I swear.

"Don't tell me you still have that craptastic phone Nina. And It's not my fault my dad made me swear 20 times to call him as soon as we get to the hotel. I'm on my way."

My teeth chattered. "H-How f-far are y-y-you-u-u?"

"10 minutes, maybe less. I have an idea, why don't you pace around for a bit? You know, get that blood flowing, and I'll be there as soon as I can."

"Alright because,  my phone says it's 2:43, the bus is coming in 17 minutes."

"Honey... it's only 2:07. We've got time. The first thing we are doing when we get to New York is buying you a new phone."

I shook my phone like a can of soda to end the call. The button for that stopped working a loooonnggg time ago. 

---------10 minutes later------------

Alright...pacing... am I feeling warm yet???

---------10 minutes later-------------

Come on, body heat! Come to Mama. Ok, guess not.

----------10 minutes later-------------

Why the hell am I not WARM...Stupid Min...Aish--AHH!

 

I hit something... or well probably some one... HARD. My arms flew everywhere as I tried to balance myself and not seem really creepy. I felt myself get closer to the floor, and I closed my eyes to brace for Impact.

 

But wait...It never came.

 

Strong arms wrapped themselves around my waist, and I gazed up at my potential savior. He was tall, and had on one of those ski masks that only let the eyes be seen. What eyes...so big, so bright, so amazing...AHH

 

"COME ON HYUNG!!!" a voice yelled farther down the road "THE LIMO is LEAVING!!!"

 

"ARASSO Taemin! I'll Be right there!!!"

 

...Taemin???

 

He set me down on the ground and I was still too stunned to speak, He ran fast, too fast and a silver object flew from his pocket... was that, the RPO exclusion!?!?!? I've been wanting that phone for a year!!! I tried to call out to him, but my voice was too squeaky, the Limo's engine was too loud, and my best friend decided to make her grand entrance...

"Yah! WHY are you on the FLOOR... Aish..." I heard Minnie grumble

 

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He was gone... and I'll never see him again.

 

Hey everyone!!! This is my first fanfic here, but I've read plenty. To be honest, Minho's not my BIAS... Key and Onew are... I think. It changes every week with me. This is made for a friend, who's name is Nina, who is African-American, and who is in love with Choi Minho. 

 

I are African-American and Cherokee, and I love shinee to death. 

I'm thinking about adding jongkey cuz they're my OTP. FREE KPOP CONCERT IN NYC. !!! SO happy …*_*  

 

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Nana9592 #1
Ummm why not finish it lol.....btw I actually had an AFF hiatus meself so I just now read the first 3 chappies they're cute too ^-^
NikopanDuh
#2
please finish it!! its so goodd!!
mysticshinee24
#3
thanks, and I based Nina, off of my friend Nina, and Minhee off of my friend YeEun. I'm really not good at describing stuff though
IAmQueen
#4
hahahaa Key is so adorable ^^ <br />
And pshh those girls are lucky Minho wants his phone back.<br />
I'd be like keep the phone I'll just cancel the serivice DX <br />
haha but the SHINee boys are nicer than me >.<<br />
Aw this was such a cute chap!! Thnx for the udate!!<br />
ChibaLian
#5
/cracks knuckles<br />
Alright, this chapter was pretty good. Nina's friend is providing the lulz, I think I like her character but this might change later on. Well, you mentioned you wanted improvement so... I guess I'll throw in some pointers?<br />
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Like I said before, the whole premise of this chapter was pretty good. A little more detail and description would be good but overall, keep doing your thang. :D
CoolNonAsian101 #6
I really like your style of writing it's great and I love the fact that an non-asian main female character. I, being one myself (hence the username lol ) keep the chapters coming my friend! :)<br />
ChibaLian
#7
Came home, saw this updated. You really made my day.<br />
xDD<br />
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LOL "We Switched!"
mysticshinee24
#8
lol! for some reason, the macros wouldnt show up... <br />
IAmQueen
#9
TT^TT I can't see the macros :(<br />
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but that was cute ^^ haha but tsk tsk she's shinee obsessed yet she doesn't recognize them?! Is she blind?!!! hehehe not to mention they used names!!! lmfao tsk tsk tsk Nina u have to be more observant hahaa <br />
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cute chap ^^
mysticshinee24
#10
Thank YOU both!