The future Wife of Choi Minho

Description

Nina, an Shinee obsessed African American girl gets to go on a trip with her friend Min-Hee. While waiting for the bus, she notices someone tall in a black hood drop a cellphone. Curious she picks it up...

Foreword

Made for a friend's birthday... She's absolutley in love with Minho lol.

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Nana9592 #1
Ummm why not finish it lol.....btw I actually had an AFF hiatus meself so I just now read the first 3 chappies they're cute too ^-^
NikopanDuh
#2
please finish it!! its so goodd!!
mysticshinee24
#3
thanks, and I based Nina, off of my friend Nina, and Minhee off of my friend YeEun. I'm really not good at describing stuff though
IAmQueen
#4
hahahaa Key is so adorable ^^ <br />
And pshh those girls are lucky Minho wants his phone back.<br />
I'd be like keep the phone I'll just cancel the serivice DX <br />
haha but the SHINee boys are nicer than me >.<<br />
Aw this was such a cute chap!! Thnx for the udate!!<br />
ChibaLian
#5
/cracks knuckles<br />
Alright, this chapter was pretty good. Nina's friend is providing the lulz, I think I like her character but this might change later on. Well, you mentioned you wanted improvement so... I guess I'll throw in some pointers?<br />
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Like I said before, the whole premise of this chapter was pretty good. A little more detail and description would be good but overall, keep doing your thang. :D
CoolNonAsian101 #6
I really like your style of writing it's great and I love the fact that an non-asian main female character. I, being one myself (hence the username lol ) keep the chapters coming my friend! :)<br />
ChibaLian
#7
Came home, saw this updated. You really made my day.<br />
xDD<br />
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LOL "We Switched!"
mysticshinee24
#8
lol! for some reason, the macros wouldnt show up... <br />
IAmQueen
#9
TT^TT I can't see the macros :(<br />
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but that was cute ^^ haha but tsk tsk she's shinee obsessed yet she doesn't recognize them?! Is she blind?!!! hehehe not to mention they used names!!! lmfao tsk tsk tsk Nina u have to be more observant hahaa <br />
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cute chap ^^
mysticshinee24
#10
Thank YOU both!