All of Me

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***my first fanfic hope you guys like it this story is about You and JaeJoong this is a fiction story& i thank DBSK_CASSIE for my poster

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My main theme song for the story***hope you listen to it***

http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=JqYsjyryWr8 

 

JaeJoong has been in love with you ever since you guys met in junoir high and he was too shy to confess his love to you. Another reason was that you were never single. After every breakup JaeJoong was always there to cheer you up. But you were too clueless to figure out that JaeJoong was madly inlove with you. Will you figure out that JaeJoong is in love with you before its too late???

*** I only have the outline of the story figured out so tell me what you think i thank DBSK_CASSIE for the poster....thank you***

Foreword

*By the way the setting is in Asia, but you can pick which part of Asia...lol

 

You

  • naive
  • not a quiter
  • best friends with jaejoong
  • never single
  • senoir at Shek High
  • 18 years old
  • very forgetfull
  • very open
  • bold
  • clueless person

JaeJoong

  • in love with you 
  • always protect you
  • rejected all the girls that asked him out
  • 19 years old
  • senoir at Shek High
  • has a younger sister with luekemia
  • not very courageous when it comes to confessing to you

Sunmi

  • jaejoong younger sister
  • lives in america to get treatment with her aunt and uncle
  • left to america since she was 12 years old
  • looks up to you
  • main goal is to find a boyfriend
  • has leukemia
  • will be introduced later on in the story

Kwon Ji Yong

  • your ex boyfriend
  • broke up with you
  • suspicious about jaejoong
  • cheated on you
  • think you are not worthy of being with him
  • only used you
  • introduced mainly in the begining of the story

Miryo

  • your older sister
  • moved to america for college
  • knows that jaejoong is in love with you
  • has a fiance in america
  • introduced later on in the story

Aron

  • asked you out three days after Kwon Ji Young dumped you
  • very persistent
  • in your seventh period class
  • jaejoon's frenemy

***this is the characters for now more coming later on in the story***

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Love_You #1
Chapter 6: Nice story! Keep the update
kpop4u #2
Cool story! update
lindalor #3
like it so far. keeping typing i want to read more.
DBSKAngel011 #4
poor jaejoong
DBSKAngel011 #5
luv jaejoong ^^ things are going to get interesting
DBSKAngel011 #6
like this so far, poor jaejoong
Giraffrey #7
I think that it is promising and that you at least possess the ability to write in coherent english =.= The foreword sounds exactly like a blurb and it's done well. I like the way you left the question hanging there. However, I'm not a fan of writing the character's personality first, then it will be harder for you to continue the story later, you will have to 'fit' the character's personality in. Then there is no space for the character's growth throughout the fanfic.
darkchocolate #8
great chapters!!!<br />
Arron!!!<br />
Jaejoong!!<br />
love both of them :)
yunalove #9
good start :)
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