【Left Eye】

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Daisuke Hibiki, a 16 year old boy, a little shorter and more frail then the average sixteen year old boy though, but nevermind that, thats just first impressions, In truth, Daisuke's left eye has a deep secret behind it.

When Daisuke was a child, his parents passed away not long after his birth. So he was put in the care of his aunt, it was only until he turned 11 then that aunt passed on too. He was always bullied, and tossed about among the other kids, all because of the left eye he had. Daisuke had that eye ever since birth, that left eye was a beautiful glittering bright shade of Gold, and was so deep & clear, you could mistake it for a priceless Gem stone. Yet Daisuke never thought of his eye as Beautiful, it was the source of his suffering, he hated it, he wanted it to be jet black like his Father's eye's like his Mother's eye's, like all of the surrounding people's eye's, like his right eye.

As the bulling and teasing dreaded on, Daisuke who was in the situation of being confused, scared and in pain, unconciously distanced himself from the others. He built a container to confine himself in, a container that split Daisuke's world, and the outside, and he was content with that. "I don't need no body" is what he always believed, but Daisuke might have not sealed his container properly, perhaps, he is waiting for someone to pound at the weaken glass, shatter open his confined little place...and steal him away.

Just what fate awaits Daisuke?

Foreword

Preview Of The 1st Chapter  The Past •

     Daisuke Hibiki, 11 years old, and just recently, My aunt had passed away. I really don't have much to fuss over, since that aunt of mine always mistreated me, called me a Monster, a bunch of annoying stuff like that. But since she was my last blood relative, I'm alone now.

     Monday morning, My alarm clock was buzzing like crazy, and darn it was annoying. I lazily pulled my self up out of bed and switched the alarm off, and strolled down to the kitchen. It was only 6:30 and I usually headed to school at 8:00, so with the extra time I had on my hands I whipped up an actual breakfast. A nice traditional japanese breakfast, I've really grown tired of the western style, with the fried eggs, toast bread and stuff, Auntie really liked that kind of food, I guess it's because she's half. Once I finished my meal and cleaned up, I decided to take a shower, and so I did. Some how, a few minutes later I caught myself staring at the mirror in the bathroom again, a sharp sigh left my mouth. 

     "I wonder when the landlady is going to kick me out and throw me into an orphange?" I pondered.
Since this apartment was originally owned by my aunt, she was the one who payed the rent, she honestly had quite a fair bit of money. Now that she's gone the rent is left unpaid and god knows that I can't even think about touching auntie's life insurance money, its only a matter of time until I'm thrown away.

     7:00, I finished showering and had dressed myself in my uniform and was ready to head to school, but it was still somewhat early, but I headed out anyways.

     "Daisuke Hibiki, are you in right now?" came a voice from the other end of the hall.

 

Author's Note: Well thats the end of the preview! hope you enjoyed my story so far! just to give you a warning this story has ShounenAi, which is BoyXBoy, but its not going to be Hardcore or anything, just sweet and fluffy <3
 

AoiAizawa
The story is progressing pretty well, I really hope you like it so far \(^w^)/

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Chijido
#1
Chapter 3: AHHHKKKK!!!! seriously~ so fluffy & cute~ it's so lovely~ :3 aww~ i want more! ! haha xD i'll wait for your next update *^*
tiramisu027
#2
Chapter 3: awww <3 I really like chap 3 the most since there were lots of Daisuke and Kei moments(YAYY^^)and Kei was kind of cheesy in this chapter too :DDD

I'm actually really glad that they're starting to become friends even though Daisuke dislike and despise people since they bully and ,Kei somehow made Daisuke open up to him^^
tiramisu027
#3
Chapter 3: OHH-MA-GUSHH!~~ THEY HUG!(they did hug,right?)AWWW <3 my daisukexkei feels!~

'I realized that I was holding into him and he was trapped, I quickly LET GO and scooted back.' NOOOO!!!!~~ WHY?!? *flips table* (╯°□°)╯︵ ┻━┻ Dai-chan you shouldn't have let go!!
tiramisu027
#4
Chapter 3: 'You were staring at me during break,weren't you? Am I really that handsome?-Kei' HAHAHHA XD dai-chan, you got caught *wiggles eyebrows* I have a feeling that he's slowly developing feelings for Kei^^


"Well, I guess he is pretty handsome, if I had to say, but he's also interesting..." HAH!!! I KNEW IT!! I KNEW IT!! my assumptions were right; Daisuke is slowly falling inlove with Kei :DD AYEE! DaisukexKei forevaarr~~ <3 (lol what is happening to me? XD)
AoiAizawa #5
Chapter 3: PLEASE ALWAYS READ THE AUTHORS NOTE OK?
NiHanExo
#6
Chapter 3: wait hold on for a second....rewind!!! i don't get it?? is the main character girl or a boy??