The Proposal

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"Happiness, you see, is just an illusion of Fate, a heavenly sleight of hand designed to make you believe in fairytales. But there's no happily ever after. You'll only find happy endings in books. Some books."

 

 

 

Foreword

 

storydetails

 

author: shineecrazed

title: the proposal

date created: 10.9.12

chapters: 2 and counting

genre: tragedy, angst, fluff, marriage (you'll see how in a few seconds)

characters: kim myungsoo of , oc

 

song prompt: Baby Steps by Varsity Fanclub

 

 

 

 

authorsnote

 

Hello everyone!

This is my first oneshot, so I hope you like it!

 

 

Comments are welcome! Feel free to bash, as long as you tell me why you hate my story. It helps me improve my writing :)

Compliments and suggestions are appreciated!

 

Enjoy!

 

[P.S. I shall be forever grateful and indebted to you if you would click the up arrow next to the story title :) I don't think I'd ever get featured, but it makes me all happy and bubbly inside when I see someone likes my story >.<]

 


Reviews:

dreaming in the clouds

Happy Banana Milk

J  E L L - O

Time For Your Fanfic Report Card!

Emerald Star

FASCINATING VERACITY

 

Contests:

The Sky Is The Limit 

Creative Ecstasy 

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chiimii
#1
Chapter 4: omgggg! your writing is soooo good! I feeel even worse loool :( I seriously need to know what's going to happen next! Please update part 2 sooon! thank yoou! xD And I saw your 'apply', but then i saw your reviewers as well. it seems like you already have a few! If you still want another opinion on this story them do PM me xD I think I would love reviewing this one unlike the other lol :D
flabbycow #2
Chapter 4: PART 2!!!!!!!! This is interesting!
yoochun1fan
#3
Chapter 1: Oooh noo that was just too sad poor Myungsoo
green_teax #4
Chapter 1: You didn't kill her, the ring did. T___T

It's amazing. :) The ending was surprising, your writing style is one of my favorite ones. ^_^
Gah.. I should get rid of loving sad endings too much..
selectedvips
#5
Chapter 1: Well I never expected him to kill her. I thought she would die some other way and have L grieve over her death. Oh gosh I'm so angsty right now.
oohjoy
#6
Chapter 1: I really liked this oneshot.
When I read the first part, I really believed that it would be a happy story.
But then again, I remembered that there is a "angst" tag.
When I read towards the end, I really became sad.
Why????!!! Why does this have to happeeen? [[LOL. Over Acting Mode]]
Anyways, Nice story.
xchessthebest
#7
Chapter 2: Thank you for unprivating the alternate ending. ^_^
That was so cute!!!!!!! Omg, I wish I can be Myungsoo's wife. ;~;
Juhee's one lucky girl. omg
xchessthebest
#8
Chapter 1: THE ENDING MADE ME SO UPSET AND SAD AND OMG.
WAE. ;~;
TofuCow
#9
Y U NO UPDATE
like how hypocritical i am?
TofuCow
#10
hana! send me the ulzzang link :)