☁ Title [10/10] : Your situation is very mutual to the alternative ending in the actual. Well Done. 

☁ Appearence [4/5] : Your poster is only revealing to the original and not the alternative ending, so I you're just one mark off from a perfect score. Next time, try to make your poster mutual if you're going to make an alternative ending or have a seperate poster. 

☁ Foreword & Description [18/20] : Both foreword & description were very well written and neatly organized. But I feel like the description should be your foreword and your foreword should be your description. Make sense? Haha. What I'm saying is what you wrote in the foreword is giving information about the story in a "report" sort of fashion. While your description is an insight of your story in  just a few words, which is what a foreword is supposed to be. 

☁ Characterization [10/10] : I read opinions on Myungsoo's inner personality and you portrayed his soft side really well in both stories. His love for Juhee is very sweet, almost as if there could possibly be an "infinite" love. Well done, very well done.  

☁Originality [9/10] : Originally, I thought to give you a prefect score because I've never read a story where the lover has killed his/her lover. But than there was the alternate which was not really original except the peas thing which I thought was adorable. 

☁ Plot [15/15] : I enjoyed both plots very well. Your angst is a bit more likeable (in my opinion) than your fluff. It's good that you're trying new things though. 

☁ Spelling/Grammar/Punctuation [15/15] : Perfect.

☁ Flow [15/15] : It flows naturally which makes the story easy to understand and read.

☁ TOTAL : 96/100 

Verdict

A very well written stroy that portrays Myungsoo very accurately.The love between Myungsoo and the Juhee is strong and "infinite" For the readers who love stories that are angst or fluffy.

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