Chapter 3

For Better Or Worse

[AN: Okay, just so you're not confused, about a year has passed since the first meeting... 9/2011 - 2/2013.]



Chapter 3

 

February 2013.

It was the month of Valentine's Day.

You hadn't come to visit us for over a month, not since Christmas.

Sungjong was in jack-in-the-box mode every day, waiting for you to show up, peeking out of the kitchen every time he heard the door open.

Sungyeol and Dongwoo kept mixing up drink orders.

Woohyun and Hoya weren't as cheerful as they used to be.

Our eldest brother, Sunggyu, refused to put up the "Help Wanted" sign, believing that you'd walk through those doors at any moment.

Even the sky seemed gloomy all the time.

Damn, _______...

You've really changed things up around here...

 

It was a cold February 9th when you finally showed up.

I could tell right away that something was wrong, the minute you walked in the door.

You don't just fall in love with someone and not be able to tell if they're hurting.

Your smile wasn't as bright as it used to, although it get pretty close when Sungjong rushed out of the kitchen and gave you a hug.

 

Your husband had been hitting you again.

I could tell from the pain in your face when the maknae squeezed you a little too tightly.

 

The others were excited to see you again, giving you hugs, patting your shoulders.

You must've been in pain, but you still smiled and accepted their happy greetings.

With a calm voice, you explained that your husband had gotten into the habit of gambling, and was now fired from his job.

Once again, you were the breadwinner of the little family, and still attending university.

 

Luckily for the two of you, you'd both decided to downgrade to a smaller apartment not too far from downtown, so you didn't have to travel so far for classes and work.

And the rent cost much less, so you didn't have to work so many hours to keep supporting yourself.

The recent move partially explained why you hadn't come to visit, but I could see that you were hiding something.

 

There was a slight discoloration over your eye, and another just below your cheekbone.

A passing glance wouldn't have caught it.

None of the boys even noticed, and they were surrounding you.

I saw it though, and I knew what it meant.

You couldn't see us until the mark on your face healed up, right?

You'd broken your promise, but I didn't mind so much.

Not when I had my own good-luck charm back.

 

With some of your former good cheer, you apologized profusely for not visiting for so long.

You even gave me a kiss on the cheek as an apology, and a hug on top of that.

Your scarf shifted when you hugged me, and I could see finger-shaped bruises on your throat.

My teeth gritted as I hugged you back, swaying from side to side.

Your light giggling made me smile, and I kissed you on the forehead.

Like I used to do.

 

Too soon, your visit was over.

With a sad expression, you told us that you probably wouldn't be able to work here, not immediately.

But you promised to be back on Valentine's Day, to give us chocolates or cookies.

We sent you off with plenty of cake and coffee, enough to last you for a week.

Another round of hugs and pats and kisses (from me), and you were out the door.

You waved at us through the window before and walking around the corner.

I could've sworn your footsteps were lighter than when you first came in.

 

Perhaps Sungjongie was right.

Maybe we really were your good luck charms.
 




AN: It's been a looonnnggg week... and I'm dead tired. Hence the short, odd chappie...

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cherLynmyung #1
Chapter 12: Love this so much!! It's Si different from others ♡
KaiOlly
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Chapter 12: Well, author-nim I'm here to give you the review that I made for this story. Ok, here goes! :)

1. Fore word - 90/100

The foreword is good. It has pics and a good synopsis. The poster is nice to. The infos are good to. Noting much to comment really

2. Pictures - 90/100

The pics you put on the foreword is still not enough. I could only say that the poster suits well with the story. It give u the vibe :) Better you added in more pics.

3. Story plot - 95/100

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4. English - 96/100

It was a pleasant use of English that u used to describe it all. The English is not bad and the vocal is good too! I think that anyone that reads it would most likely find it pleasing :)

5. Writing style - 96/100

I sort of liked your writing style in this story! The way you write it, is easy for me to get the atmosphere, the feelings and to understand the whole story :) Although, there are a few parts that I find quite hard to catch, still it's something that you shouldn't worry bout.

6. Total markings : 93%

Some marks you got there! Overall, I think that this story is really amazing! I enjoyed reading this! It makes me want to read this non-stop, but unfortunately, I must stop and good thing must come to an end. The story has its perfect ending, even though it's a sad one. I liked it how you relate the domestic violence in this story and gave out advice for the readers, it's nice of you to do that. I shall say, thank you for writing this kind of story and madew me enjoyed reading it ^^~

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KaiOlly
#3
Chapter 12: Yes you are correct! 100% correct!
KaiOlly
#4
Chapter 11: Oh my gawd.... Seriously, this chap is really sad T.T I can't believe that she died. Serve Seunghyun rights for treating her that way. I wish that Myungsoo would just beat the hell out of him.
KaiOlly
#5
Chapter 2: OMOG! Myungsoo and a marred woman?! How bad can he get? ^^
KaiOlly
#6
Chapter 1: Nice 1st chap! It's really....short and simple :)
JungChaeWon #7
Chapter 2: Omg i love your poster!!! Nice fic!!
-2Mirae-
14 streak #8
Chapter 12: This story is so sad!!! I hate how there are those type of people in this world T.T i feel sad for her and her children and L.....
Anyways..... I cried in almost every chapter ;A; ♥
cuteheartbreaker13
#9
Chapter 12: I luv the story but its sooo sad TT^TT
inSHININGspirit
#10
Chapter 12: OMG this is the first story which i read which made me cry. :') I agree that domestic violence is not a joke. i really love your style of writing btw. ^^